Time

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Feb 2006 · 2 comments

If only it could turn back time, if only it could turn back time. The hands of the clock are cruel and unloving. The minutes on the hour don't care much what anyone else thinks, rudely passing everyone by. The seconds come and go without looking anyone in the eye. The days just so by, flying away like the leaves on the ground. Tick tock, tick tock. Time waits for no man.

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[2] Dovina 3-Feb-06/7:09 AM Reply

misspellings, cliche in the last line. Do yoy mean "if only I" in the redundent first line?

[5] zodiac 3-Feb-06/9:19 AM Reply

My suggestion is don't put anything in a poem if you've already heard it before. That pretty much covers all poems about "Time".