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Time (Free verse) by sk8rs_rule_all

If only it could turn back time, if only it could turn back time. The hands of the clock are cruel and unloving. The minutes on the hour don't care much what anyone else thinks, rudely passing everyone by. The seconds come and go without looking anyone in the eye. The days just so by, flying away like the leaves on the ground. Tick tock, tick tock. Time waits for no man.

zodiac 3-Feb-06/9:19 AM
My suggestion is don't put anything in a poem if you've already heard it before. That pretty much covers all poems about "Time".




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