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Sometimes (Free verse) by pinay_miss_azn
Sometimes When you cry, you feel like you want to die You're all alone crying at night waiting for everything to be right Soon your tears start to dry because you're all out of tears You have the strength to try to face your inner most fears If you cry you'll be all alone at night and nothing else will be right because you didn't even try.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9594
Posted: July 8, 2004 3:25 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2004 3:25 PM PDT
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[0] cheese.doodles @ 70.52.169.248 | 8-Apr-07/8:58 AM | Reply
Boo hoo. This is a pimple poem. If you read your poetry to others, no wonder you have no friends.
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