| Re: Flea poem by Sing4Jesus! |
26-Oct-06/9:58 AM |
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| Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus! |
26-Oct-06/9:59 AM |
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The last stanza gives me hope for mankind.
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| Re: Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove |
3-Nov-06/5:04 AM |
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Right on, Edna. I get pissed off with all these namby-pambies rabbiting on about drinking and driving. Most accidents are caused by unlicensed yobs (often Afros) who can't drive and who have no insurance (mainly becaused the car has been stolen).
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| Re: Going Away to Fight a War by wilco |
3-Nov-06/5:08 AM |
Boring tripe. Learn the difference between
ITS
and
IT'S
before writing anything again.
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| Re: The 80's by wilco |
3-Nov-06/5:09 AM |
Not at all bad.
Maybe move to a better neighbourhood (If you can afford it).
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| Re: Cool In The Army by wilco |
3-Nov-06/5:10 AM |
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Yes, anyone who joins the army is dumb and deserves to get put into a body bag.
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| Re: Ash by horus8 |
3-Nov-06/5:11 AM |
Badly punctuated.
Badly written.
Crap in short.
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| Re: Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20 |
3-Nov-06/5:14 AM |
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I am pleased I missed the previous version(s) - they must have sucked bigtime!
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| Re: James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
3-Nov-06/5:15 AM |
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3-Nov-06/5:16 AM |
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| Re: Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins |
3-Nov-06/5:17 AM |
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This is excellent. Why was his stool hanging out? Had you answered that I would say 10/10. As it is it has to be an 8/10.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Nov-06/5:18 AM |
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You poems range from the realy excellent to the really crap. Guess which this one is. 1/10
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3-Nov-06/5:20 AM |
This is one of your better efforts. I have been to Australia which is a beautiful country inhabited by a load of twats plus the orientals and the abos.
Only the British could have hit on the delicious irony of shipping their convicts to such a nice place.
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| Re: Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins |
3-Nov-06/5:22 AM |
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Who's VioletSuede, Stevie?
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| Re: In a Church by Sasha |
13-Nov-06/9:53 AM |
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| Re: Edna's Lovely World Cup Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
13-Nov-06/9:56 AM |
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This gives me mixed feelings; football is working class trash, so if I praise the poem, am I praising football?
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14-Jan-07/11:54 AM |
I was amused at your author's biog. I quote:
"I enjoy new writing challenges and rspond to critique in two ways,posotive criticism where the person has expressed a way to improve the poem or a suggestion in the same vein i am happy to accept and send thanks, stupid rude unecessary comments i respond with venom! I enjoy writing to other poets and reading their work which i belive is a helpful way to improve my own writing and try different disciplines in poetry writing."
I am delighted to meet someone whose spelling is second only to his inability to write poetry. 0/10.
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14-Jan-07/11:55 AM |
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Archaic, not an original thought or concept in sight. Totally terrible. I shat myself reading it.
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14-Jan-07/11:57 AM |
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Dreary, longwinded, pompous, derivative tripe.
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14-Jan-07/11:59 AM |
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I was pleased when I finished reading this. Pleased there was no more. Don't give up the day job.
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