Re: Pain by PoeticJustice	26-Sep-06/9:08 AM
I like the last couple of paragraphs...the lighter falling, the hate, the vows, the truth...all very emotional, very well written.
Re: a comment on Final Goregasm by creepshow	13-Sep-06/2:10 PM
How "Saucy" of you to ask...
Re: a comment on Covet by creepshow	3-Sep-06/8:42 AM
The title is about someone coveting someone else, and making them their own...they watch, and wait and take the opportunity...they covet. Thank you.
Re: a comment on Watcher by creepshow	22-Aug-06/1:52 PM
While some people enjoy writing about flowers and love, and how it inspires them to better themselves, I choose the opposite side, focusing in on all the negative emotions that love can bring, the cruel way it can inflict pain and suffering without regret...that to me is more exiting than depressing, and more heartfelt and real to be melancholy.
Re: Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim	21-Aug-06/6:01 PM
Any form of necrophilia is good and pleasant and beautiful..The odors...ah, so noxious it is vibrantly erotic, kissing blue pale lips, cold and hard...anyways, great stuff, but this is just bare bones...You need more MEAT, and substance (potatoes)...my suggestion is this: go into the graveyard at night, and just sit there for a while, inhale the air, poke around, let the dead give you mental stimulation...then come back and tell us all about your exploits about necrophilia...God bless you, 666!
Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove	21-Aug-06/5:53 PM
Finally something with some fucking emotion, and something that screams red colors flashing your eyes grabbing attention to it...beautiful. And how true that there is such pleasant ecstacy in sheer agony...even if it is super cheesy and dirrrty...lol. You rock!
Re: a comment on Belong by creepshow	21-Aug-06/10:57 AM
Creepshow...yes, and thanks for the vote. My writings may be dark, but they are true emotional feelings of intensity...coming alive, and hopefully you can experience the feelings being provoked...lol.
Re: How to Bleed by MacFrantic	14-Aug-06/8:16 AM
I like the "do it slowly and grimace" part...I can relate...A silent ecstacy in pain. You write from the heart.
Re: Pale Blue by MacFrantic	14-Aug-06/8:14 AM
I like the last few lines, "...sail into a pale blue Nothingness like you." Very piercing.
Re: Here's your God by Caducus	1-Aug-06/10:24 AM
Good stuff, especially: God is just an excuse...I really dig that. Very intense.
Re: a comment on A Cripples Brittle Broken Bones by creepshow	31-Jul-06/2:53 PM
Yeah, my thoughts were a bit rambled, but you apparently got the message. I appreciate your comments, and thanks for the vote.
Re: To Talitha by amanda_dcosta	27-Jul-06/12:11 PM
I thought the flow of the poem was great, natural and reflective.
Re: a comment on Tribute by creepshow	20-Jul-06/7:41 AM
Yes, it is a tribute to all that is vile, dead within itself touching to destroy all. Tribute is an homage to all the horror.
Re: Tribute by creepshow	20-Jul-06/7:40 AM
Yes, hence the title, it is a tribute to the macabre and horror.