on Tribute by creepshow
20 Jul 2006, 7:40 AM
Yes, hence the title, it is a tribute to the macabre and horror.
on Here's your God by Caducus
1 Aug 2006, 10:24 AM
Good stuff, especially: God is just an excuse...I really dig that. Very intense.
on To Talitha by amanda_dcosta
27 Jul 2006, 12:11 PM
I thought the flow of the poem was great, natural and reflective.
on How to Bleed by MacFrantic
14 Aug 2006, 8:16 AM
I like the "do it slowly and grimace" part...I can relate...A silent ecstacy in pain. You write from the heart.
on Pale Blue by MacFrantic
14 Aug 2006, 8:14 AM
I like the last few lines, "...sail into a pale blue Nothingness like you." Very piercing.
on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove
21 Aug 2006, 5:53 PM
Finally something with some fucking emotion, and something that screams red colors flashing your eyes grabbing attention to it...beautiful. And how true that there is such pleasant ecstacy in sheer agony...even if it is super cheesy and dirrrty...lol. You rock!
on Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim
21 Aug 2006, 6:01 PM
Any form of necrophilia is good and pleasant and beautiful..The odors...ah, so noxious it is vibrantly erotic, kissing blue pale lips, cold and hard...anyways, great stuff, but this is just bare bones...You need more MEAT, and substance (potatoes)...my suggestion is this: go into the graveyard at night, and just sit there for a while, inhale the air, poke around, let the dead give you mental stimulation...then come back and tell us all about your exploits about necrophilia...God bless you, 666!
on Pain by PoeticJustice
26 Sep 2006, 9:08 AM
I like the last couple of paragraphs...the lighter falling, the hate, the vows, the truth...all very emotional, very well written.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2006, 10:19 AM
Very nice, especially "Writhing in bloody embraces...stained sheets our lovers shroud..." Very descriptive and dark...how vampiric and lovely.