on A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus!
24 Aug 2006, 4:15 PM
You are fucking mad.
on The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=-
17 Aug 2006, 4:18 PM
Genius.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2006, 3:32 AM
What am amusing little anecdote. Which of your simian relations is this about?
on Untitled (a draft) by rnuk
17 Aug 2006, 4:13 PM
Your best one so far. I liked "shoulderless shrug".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
on Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk
17 Aug 2006, 4:11 PM
Surely the penultimate line should be
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2006, 4:58 PM
OK, I suppose.
on My Pet Gerbil by Engelbert Humpalot
20 Aug 2006, 5:14 AM
I have always found a large plastic bag is sufficient to keep small rodents still during sodomy. Lovely poem, keep 'em rolling. Let's roll, in fact.
on 6 bloody mary's/2 cups of Rossi by Crakyamuni
20 Aug 2006, 5:19 AM
Deliciously illiterate and incompetent. I have read better things on toilet walls.
on Over beast by Crakyamuni
20 Aug 2006, 5:20 AM
You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2006, 5:20 AM
Pathetic.
on the servers' reaction to gypsies by ~incarnate~
20 Aug 2006, 5:22 AM
Quite interesting but spoiled by using dud grammar/slang occasionally (eg "close minded") and an abence of punctuation.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2006, 4:11 PM
Delicious. BUT change the typo in line 8. I love you.
on Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins
24 Aug 2006, 4:11 PM
I love shoving stools 8" up a boy's ass.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2006, 4:12 PM
Very good indeed. We may become friends. 10/10. But watch it.
on The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus!
23 Aug 2006, 3:28 PM
Fucking hilarious! Give it a 0/10 for talent, 10/10 for satire. The problem is: which? For the moment 5/10 and I'll make my mind up later.
on The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!
23 Aug 2006, 3:28 PM
Fabulous! Utter shit!
on The Tale Of Marietta And The Hornbag Priest (v.1) by Edna Sweetlove
24 Aug 2006, 8:16 AM
I'll start this off by giving it a 10 myself. I am my own harshest critic and I think this is the minimum it deserves. Everyone else, please be more generous.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2006, 4:13 PM
Be more fucking careful! Last line: thought not though. Why bollocks it through carelessness? Cunt.
on some deleted poem
24 Aug 2006, 4:14 PM
Revised rating.