| Re: Chickens by rnuk |
17-Aug-06/3:26 AM |
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Interesting, although a faulty analogy with Marxism. I would have thought the poem fitted Capitalism better.
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17-Aug-06/3:32 AM |
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What am amusing little anecdote. Which of your simian relations is this about?
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| Re: Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk |
17-Aug-06/4:11 PM |
Surely the penultimate line should be
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
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| Re: Untitled (a draft) by rnuk |
17-Aug-06/4:13 PM |
Your best one so far. I liked "shoulderless shrug".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
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| Re: The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=- |
17-Aug-06/4:18 PM |
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19-Aug-06/4:58 PM |
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| Re: My Pet Gerbil by Engelbert Humpalot |
20-Aug-06/5:14 AM |
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I have always found a large plastic bag is sufficient to keep small rodents still during sodomy. Lovely poem, keep 'em rolling. Let's roll, in fact.
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| Re: 6 bloody mary's/2 cups of Rossi by Crakyamuni |
20-Aug-06/5:19 AM |
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Deliciously illiterate and incompetent. I have read better things on toilet walls.
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| Re: Over beast by Crakyamuni |
20-Aug-06/5:20 AM |
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You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.
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20-Aug-06/5:20 AM |
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| Re: the servers' reaction to gypsies by ~incarnate~ |
20-Aug-06/5:22 AM |
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Quite interesting but spoiled by using dud grammar/slang occasionally (eg "close minded") and an abence of punctuation.
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| Re: The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus! |
23-Aug-06/3:28 PM |
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Fucking hilarious! Give it a 0/10 for talent, 10/10 for satire. The problem is: which? For the moment 5/10 and I'll make my mind up later.
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| Re: The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus! |
23-Aug-06/3:28 PM |
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| Re: The Tale Of Marietta And The Hornbag Priest (v.1) by Edna Sweetlove |
24-Aug-06/8:16 AM |
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I'll start this off by giving it a 10 myself. I am my own harshest critic and I think this is the minimum it deserves. Everyone else, please be more generous.
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24-Aug-06/4:11 PM |
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Delicious. BUT change the typo in line 8. I love you.
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| Re: Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins |
24-Aug-06/4:11 PM |
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I love shoving stools 8" up a boy's ass.
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24-Aug-06/4:12 PM |
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Very good indeed. We may become friends. 10/10. But watch it.
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24-Aug-06/4:13 PM |
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Be more fucking careful! Last line: thought not though. Why bollocks it through carelessness? Cunt.
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24-Aug-06/4:14 PM |
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| Re: A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus! |
24-Aug-06/4:15 PM |
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