| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
26-Jul-02/2:04 PM |
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you have a horrible face!
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| Re: love is true by -=??lilaznjen??=- |
26-Jul-02/2:19 PM |
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Line 1: 'Love' is neither true nor false. It is not a propostition. Line 2: This doesn't tell us anything we don't already know. Its sole purpose is to rhyme with Line 4. This makes the poeme seem forced. Lines 3&4: These make people say 'cute' or 'witty'. I could understand this if they were so hilarious that they made up for the rest of the piece. Unfortunately they fail. You fail.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Jul-02/5:35 AM |
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Yeah lol! Great comment Garrett!
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| Re: Reverse Pschology by Mister Cakes |
27-Jul-02/6:36 PM |
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Ahhh but this isn't meant to be reverse 'psychology'. It's reverse 'Pschology'. Didn't you read the title, Dweeb-Features?
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| Re: Cow Do by http://David Bowman |
28-Jul-02/5:42 AM |
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I like the way you used "pooh" instead of "poo" to make it seem less naughty.
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| Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8 |
28-Jul-02/8:26 AM |
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I don't care what you say. I can get four people to testify he was building my hotrod at the time.
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| Re: Yes Sir by wolfgang |
28-Jul-02/8:26 AM |
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Seriously chess isn't that hard to learn.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jul-02/8:28 AM |
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While I'm sure mocking Nirvana is an admirable pursuit, you could have at least thought of some mockery of your own.
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| Re: Truth of the Moon by ObiWonKn |
28-Jul-02/8:29 AM |
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God damn it why does every third poem I read make absolutely no fucking sense? Lines like 'guarding our only truth' are the fastest way to Hell, my lad.
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| Re: Rain by frostygirl |
28-Jul-02/3:57 PM |
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I do believe you're a dunce.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jul-02/4:51 PM |
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Yes. Beggars are important too. Yes. Yes. Yes.
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| Re: Me and the Darkness by aurora |
28-Jul-02/5:03 PM |
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I don't think this is a very good poeme. I especially like the fourth verse, in which you could only think of two lines so you just repeated them to make it four. Moreover, the whole piece is an utterly ridiculous attempt to appear 'deep' and 'troubled'. It's just a vague, teenage rambling about 'darkness'. No matter how hard you try, any poeme that tries to be 'dark' by using the word 'darkness' will fail. You fail.
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| Re: ~Witchcraft~ by Lenore |
28-Jul-02/5:07 PM |
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I suggest: A scented wind wafting, embrowning the air / blew through the cheeks of soiled dispair
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jul-02/5:09 PM |
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I delete recent ones and submit new ones. It's a great way to keep your material flowing! Have a great time on poemeranker! Cheers mate! lol!
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28-Jul-02/6:02 PM |
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Only by letting go can one truly see how awful the other side is. P.S. Do you have the microfilm?
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28-Jul-02/6:27 PM |
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| Re: CityClub by wolfgang |
28-Jul-02/6:29 PM |
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So, basically, what you're saying is that you're part of an l33t subculture, no? GEE FUCK ME I WISH I WAS PART OF AN L33T SUBCULTURE. And because I don't think I can read any more of horus8's comment-based obscurities without generating some, closet dweezle did you know why did O Jesu what have I done?
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| Re: The Price by Bluesee |
28-Jul-02/6:32 PM |
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See 'Pants' by Settle for more information on dresses. You might also get some insane crap but what the fuck it looks like you could use some more material.
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| Re: The Way You Could Say Nothing (But still I understood) by frostygirl |
28-Jul-02/6:33 PM |
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There once was a girl from Montana/Who liked to get off on bananas/But after a while/She had awful piles/Because she was putting the banana in the wrong hole the silly cow.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jul-02/6:51 PM |
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And he should know. horus8 is a hard-hitting street poete.
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