regarding some deleted poem...	19-Sep-04/3:05 PM
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regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-04/10:23 AM
Comparable in horrifying familiarity to the sensation of being raped by an out-of-control hobo in your own back garden.
Re: friend by kthulah	26-Sep-04/5:44 AM
The only ironically named beige baby I know is Koko P. Maroon. And he's dead from AIDS.
Re: Put it away! by Special Needs	30-Sep-04/4:07 AM
Lactation is not a form of excretion. You should have written 'secrete' instead. For that, I'm appalled.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Oct-04/2:15 AM
Little Cack Horner Shat in a corner Eating his turds and gay Along came a spastic Who did something drastic All over the kitchen buffet
Re: For Beth, after anal intercourse by zodiac	11-Oct-04/5:40 AM
Sometimes you produce the most awful bungling bogstanton.
Re: Room 34 Ashford Hospital by Caducus	11-Oct-04/5:46 AM
Oh goodness, your swear has sent shivers of naughtiness up and down my spine. Did you know that Hobos have a top speed of four miles per hour?
Re: No Single Tear by Enchantres	16-Oct-04/3:58 PM
lol
Re: Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper	16-Oct-04/6:11 PM
Once I woke up to find that a thin old man was pressing his sagging buttocks against my face. "Who are you?!" I muffledly asked, frantically secreting from my Panic-nozzle. "Parp!" replied the buttocks.
Re: Fast Dreams by cuddlytiger17	18-Oct-04/6:56 AM
"Here is found a paradox in that during the latter third of the nineteenth century, in a period characterized by the vilification of the tramp, there is a concomitant process occurring that also eulogized them." from "The American Hobo" by Colin Beesley
Re: !!! by Jezabele-In-Hell	19-Oct-04/2:21 PM
This is a disastrous attempt at poetry. It is among the worst I have ever read. The subject couldn't be less original, and the way you have written about it is utterly unremarkable. Your work is completely devoid of alliteration, simile, reification or any such literary devices. It is devoid of rhyme, devoid of imagery, and devoid of punctuation. The language used is whoppingly dull, and the overriding impression it gives is one of unbelievable mindlessness. The arbitrary line breaks and use of repetition are the only things that separate this bulgingly stupid dumpling from a blob of prose. Congratulations! -10-
Re: Jealousy's Game by TLRufener	24-Oct-04/11:27 AM
Clumsy in places, but I thought it was interesting and fairly original. I can't think of many people on this site who'd have the vision to include a tiny, stout, scheming man with a pudgy head in their love poemes, let alone the vision to have him feverishly planning out his revenge on paper. Is he a metaphor for the human condition?
Re: Muslim woman at the office by zodiac	24-Oct-04/11:36 AM
Got back from Abu Dhabi last week, just after the start of Ramamamamadan. Luckily I'd spent the week leading up to it ordering individual beers from room service (they wouldn't serve more than one a day) and hiding them about my room. When I drank them all during Ramamamadan, and left the empties sprawled all over the place, the cleaners found them and took away my fruit bowl. I have never felt such shame :(
Re: Blackthoughtz by blackthoughtz1	24-Oct-04/12:13 PM
A profoundly silly piece. I have no doubt you are a giant wally. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-04/8:45 AM
It's really excellent that you describe the plates as 'hard'. I've often noticed that about plates. Your language captures their essence completely.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-04/8:49 AM
To bring fright is bad enough, but to bring BOTH fright AND fearfulness is calamitous indeed!
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-04/9:39 AM
You cannot write lines like, She seems to be doing well so far this year, And her team makes her so happy, that she must shed a tear. and not be incredibly thick.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-04/11:13 AM
This is exactly what every single black person looks like: http://tinyurl.com/4tz3k
Re: Grandma in love by Caducus	26-Oct-04/11:41 AM
Intensely lewd, particularly the bit where you scoff your grandmother's remains.
Re: Lost by Sweet Cheese	26-Oct-04/12:18 PM
You're foreign.