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Blackthoughtz (Free verse) by blackthoughtz1
Curiosity of the mind runs astray to no avail/deep thoughts scramble
thoughts/frustrated at what the physical lacks or fails to tell/
concentration of contemplation leaves inner visuals of warped stars
basked in darkness/a journey into the depth of me/the distance parallel
as the ocean's floor to the third Heaven/majority of what you'll never
see/boggled by a precise explanation/to the shallow /a lack thereof/
knowledge to the close-minded/noncommunicable/communication posessing
dialect beholding intellect/existence rare to slightly moderate/verbal
creativity/prisoner/suppressed/abstract masterpieces misplaced as lost
souls/hidden talents surfaced/cast away/sadly second-guessed/in this
piece/released/my peace/collage of questions reiterating previous
answers/all the colors of my mind collaborate/to present/abridged/
My Blackthoughtz.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.25
Weighted score: 5.2682066
Overall Rank: 3922
Posted: October 20, 2004 2:19 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2004 2:19 PM PDT
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