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Blackthoughtz (Free verse) by blackthoughtz1

Curiosity of the mind runs astray to no avail/deep thoughts scramble thoughts/frustrated at what the physical lacks or fails to tell/ concentration of contemplation leaves inner visuals of warped stars basked in darkness/a journey into the depth of me/the distance parallel as the ocean's floor to the third Heaven/majority of what you'll never see/boggled by a precise explanation/to the shallow /a lack thereof/ knowledge to the close-minded/noncommunicable/communication posessing dialect beholding intellect/existence rare to slightly moderate/verbal creativity/prisoner/suppressed/abstract masterpieces misplaced as lost souls/hidden talents surfaced/cast away/sadly second-guessed/in this piece/released/my peace/collage of questions reiterating previous answers/all the colors of my mind collaborate/to present/abridged/ My Blackthoughtz.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Oct-04/12:13 PM
A profoundly silly piece. I have no doubt you are a giant wally. -10-




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