regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-04/4:11 PM
There's more to poetry than likening things to flowers, you know. And just how is friendship bigger than the sky? Nothing's bigger than the sky you idiot. Good one, though -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-04/4:16 PM
I don't like this poeme. The rhymes are rubbish. Bloody silly stuff, I'm afraid :(
Re: Alone by rrashi	27-Oct-04/3:15 AM
Astonishing use of "fumes" to rhyme with "perfume".
Re: repeated sins, repeated prayer by oneglove	27-Oct-04/3:32 AM
By posting this prayer on a public prayer ranking website, you've definitely increased your chances of getting into heaven. Well done!
Re: Now you're inside my heart by elizabethann	29-Oct-04/4:48 PM
Much like the unsavoury whoosh emitted when one inserts one's foot into a wellington.
Re: This path by midnitebeauty101	29-Oct-04/4:52 PM
Yes; the walk to the outhouse can be a terrible, lonely thing. Especially when you know you're going to do a whopper turd.
Re: My Friend Burgers by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	30-Oct-04/8:04 AM
I was just about to send Burgers a link to this poeme, but on reading it a second time I realised that that would be an unbelievably appalling idea. Particularly so soon after his you know what.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-04/6:15 AM
Prayer of life (Other) by njuGold In weakness, in suffering, and mercy to love More spiritually, more gracefully as below and much as above Was it Me?? (Free verse) by ga_writer You were my angel sent from above, Sent here for me to shower you with my love. Angel (Free verse) by Butterfly1120 She to me is an angel. One sent from up above. Here to give, and not recieve, someone with so much love. The meaning of Love (Free verse) by The Slender Blade What is this? An angel in heaven? No, this is love, From the skies above. Child of my Buttocks (Lyric) by -=Dark_Angel=- For Jesu's legendary scorn Is pitiful, and flawed by Love. The greatest anguish from Above Song For My Soulmate (Lyric) by John K Have you ever seen to people madly in love? They've been given a gift from their God above. Forbidden Love (Ode) by crystal lane swift I know He is watching from above, Is our moment all a dream? Why must this be a forbidden love? Am I Good Enough? (Free verse) by crystal lane swift I want nothing more than for you to return my love. I write pretty lines for you about the heavens above. An Angel (Lyric) by broken_wing11 An angel walked thru the gates today Into His heavens up above An angel has been blessed She left us with her love A.E.G. (Free verse) by nowhereman How can you say you feel no love for me, I hold you so high above Goodbye (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey Maybe someday he'll find true love Just know "sunshine" will be watching from above. Sent from Above (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly Time passed and we spoke move and soon we fell in love And in my heart I knew it was true this love was from above Essential Love (Other) by CharismaAllOver when God made you, God made love from high in heaven high above. Good Love (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w what makes a good love does it come from above I Love You (Free verse) by babyBOOMER I Will Never Compromise My Love Yet Dreaming Takes Me Far Away Of a Woman Lying above lost love (Free verse) by cherish My head aches from heartaches of my lost love. Also in hopes of one day being together one day up above. Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard I do believe the lord above Created you for me to love Symbol Of Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard So they say goodbye to their symbol of love As their baby moves on to god above You Give Me Love (Free verse) by Free2Rhyme15 The brightest star shinning, in the sky above Is nothing to you the person who gives me love. love 2 (Free verse) by little_angel_maria as i've failed in all of the above, I admit by chance maybe i just fell in love Tragic Love (Sonnet) by WithoutLife A heart that can never be given away To the one I truly love, Must forever wonder astray Was it condemned from above? It's All 'Cause I Love You (Free verse) by Tigger8023 You're the perfect star in the sky above, The one I wish upon with all my love. My One True Love (Lyric) by Hooman We'll reach out to the mystery above, For we have the blessing of our fate, As you are my one and only true love. My Guardian Angel (Limerick) by ramtheman1 I know my mom's in the heavens above, Watching over us all with lots of love. My Angel (Free verse) by baby_d You have proved to be an angel, Sent from heaven above. To bring back to me, The faith I had lost in Love. The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') (Pimple) by scitz I have fell deep in love, She’s an Angel from the sky above. LIKE AN ANGEL (Free verse) by jeremy bjelland She has lots of love, Just like an angel from above. Angel (Lyric) by mistaric You’re an angel, Sent from up above You’re an angel, You’re the one I love
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-04/6:30 AM
"God the invisibility through which gift is hail" What does that mean? "gift is hail"!? Maybe you mean "hailed". "The amplifier of a syncopated tone that moan" Yet again (and this seems to be a regular theme in your work) you fail to conjugate a verb in the third person. The line should be: "The amplifier of a syncopated tone that moans" Similarly: "through which life unfold" "the bell tolls and chime" In fact, I do believe I've spotted a pattern in your misconjugations. It's your insistance on exact rhyming. Here we see that you wanted to rhyme "hailed" with "sail", but couldn't so you changed it to "hail". Which doesn't make sense. You wanted to rhyme "moans" with "known", but because of your insistance on exact rhymes, you couldn't so changed it to "moan". You wanted to rhyme "unfolds" with "gold": ditto. And you wanted to rhyme "chimes" with "time": ditto again. In short, most of your rhymes are forced, at the expense of not making any sense. A very silly poeme indeed. -10-
Re: Neil Simon is Living in My Lunula by MacFrantic	4-Nov-04/5:10 PM
I think this should be classified as 'Other'.
Re: 10.25.04 by oneglove	4-Nov-04/5:14 PM
On 10.25.04, while you were gallavanting about in pursuit of the ultimate lewd, I was at home soaking my mulberries in the oils of clove. If only you could boast of time similarly well spent, my lad.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	5-Nov-04/12:46 PM
I tried to beard Christ with a money shot, slath'ring him thick with my "honey". But to my surprise, It went in his eyes, Which he didn't think was 'tall funny.
Re: Jesus by Dovina	11-Nov-04/8:13 PM
The only circumstances under which I would describe a poeme as "Reflections on/after something" are circumstances of extreme jest. Yet this is no jest. With your very soul exuding conviction, you have actually begun a poeme with the dumpling: Reflections After Reading The New Testament. I suggest you go away and reflect on what you've done.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Nov-04/12:26 PM
Profoundly stupid. Delegation is a time management technique, but you seem to think it's somehow equivalent to or a product of procrastination, which is the failure to apply any time management techniques.
Re: perfection by amanda3	21-Nov-04/7:23 AM
You are a deeply confused, silly person.
Re: Me, Myself, and I by TLRufener	22-Nov-04/4:35 PM
Jesus wept.
Re: Guinness by Dovina	25-Nov-04/6:23 PM
Do any of your poemes rhyme? I just tried going through the rigmarole of checking each one to see, but only got through the first three before thinking "Sod this, I'll just ask her if any of them rhyme". Well? Do they? Nearly all my poemes rhyme.
Re: Emotions Color Your Thoughts by cuddlytiger17	5-Dec-04/12:08 PM
Beautiful... what colour is hope?
Re: Kaleidoscopic (Re-Edit) by Sasha	5-Dec-04/12:10 PM
Great use of "Nope" to rhyme with "kaleidoscope"!!11
Re: The Rockets’ Song by Dovina	5-Dec-04/12:14 PM
The tradegy of war... I sometimes wonder whether the real tradegy isn't war, but you, and you're appalling poemes :(