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Now you're inside my heart (Free verse) by elizabethann
It’s like I’m trying to breathe And I cannot when you look at me Everything you do makes me pause And wonder how someone could be so incredible. I know I don’t show it well, I know my ways are not of the norm, But this is the only way I know, I’m praying that someone will show me another path. And I believe that someone could be you I believe in you and everything you do. You have made me so much more Than I was before You showed me your light When I was bathed in my darkness. You mean the world to me… Sometimes I stray from you Sometimes I do exactly what I shouldn’t do But you have to know You have to understand That when a smile comes upon my face It’s because you take me to another place, A place where I can be myself And I can be content.


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8249
Posted: October 28, 2004 5:50 PM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2004 5:50 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 82.39.20.71 | 29-Oct-04/4:48 PM | Reply
Much like the unsavoury whoosh emitted when one inserts one's foot into a wellington.
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