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Now you're inside my heart (Free verse) by elizabethann
Itâs like Iâm trying to breathe
And I cannot when you look at me
Everything you do makes me pause
And wonder how someone could be so incredible.
I know I donât show it well,
I know my ways are not of the norm,
But this is the only way I know,
Iâm praying that someone will show me another path.
And I believe that someone could be you
I believe in you and everything you do.
You have made me so much more
Than I was before
You showed me your light
When I was bathed in my darkness.
You mean the world to meâ¦
Sometimes I stray from you
Sometimes I do exactly what I shouldnât do
But you have to know
You have to understand
That when a smile comes upon my face
Itâs because you take me to another place,
A place where I can be myself
And I can be content.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8249
Posted: October 28, 2004 5:50 PM PDT; Last modified: October 28, 2004 5:50 PM PDT
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