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weather poem part 12: a dream (Other) by nypoet22
Everyone mentions the weather, grey and faceless;
searching for the shrink's office, he knows
without looking that it has passed nine,
and though his appointment was made for eight
he muses that they might forgive when he arrives.
Walking off an unnamed highway exit he stops
to ask for directions, unfazed that his car has disappeared.
And the only soul to ask is a dingy old woman
wielding a metal mallet, which she lays
on the ground with a muffled word:
you got to squeeze all the beauty you can outta this life
'cause it ain't comin' back.
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Posted: September 8, 2006 3:25 AM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2006 3:25 AM PDT
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