on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 7:59 PM
What a great sonnet!
on some deleted poem
23 Jan 2003, 11:52 AM
My God! This poeme is so beautiful that it doesn't even make any sense! Are you a pro?
on some deleted poem
23 Jan 2003, 11:35 AM
My God! MY GOD! What have you done... *weeps*
on The Ode that never was by Shardik
23 Jan 2003, 11:47 AM
Durst you bespatter the Good Name of Pirgayte LeChoadk with this tawdry example of post-apocalyptic incontinence!? A pox on thee!
on Jesus was the Antichrist by TheDevil
23 Jan 2003, 12:00 PM
Ahhhh gutted! I didn't look. I kept my eyes shut the whole time. Even when I typed in this comment. I then employed a method of trial and error combined with some intelligent guess-work to click on the 'Submit' button. GUTTED TO THE MAX!
on The darkest woods ever by Shardik
23 Jan 2003, 12:35 PM
Once I went for a walk in the woods and trod in some dog poo.
on Host by Imperfections
22 Jan 2003, 5:42 AM
You're a laxative
to my constipation
I'm bloated
while you're gone
with relentless filth
and unbroken wind
fermenting
within my bowels
to my constipation
I'm bloated
while you're gone
with relentless filth
and unbroken wind
fermenting
within my bowels
on Stars of the sky by GTK
23 Jan 2003, 11:07 AM
This is the BEST, absolute BEST exploration of human themes I've ever read!!!!
Oh wait... actually it's crap.
Oh wait... actually it's crap.
on Library and Information Centre by Nicholas Jones
23 Jan 2003, 11:11 AM
I have never seen a more klepto-masturbatory entrepoid. After reading this poeme, I think I've just glimpsed all our hypocracies in one huge neuroplastic ellipse. GREAT WORK!
on Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29
23 Jan 2003, 11:22 AM
If only someone had told me that before I decided to read this poeme. Or before I ingested that rather unpleasant sclerotic diaper toolkit.
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2003, 3:53 PM
Often at night I hear a crying sound coming out just below my nose.
on nothing, as today by <~>
21 Jan 2003, 3:59 PM
I'd say this is another tawdry example of my whimsical commenting style.
on Immortalised by singingsoul
20 Jan 2003, 10:14 AM
No mercy for what we are doing. No thought to even what we have done. We don't need to feel the sorrow. No remorse for the helpless one.
(War without end)
NO REMORSE
NO REPENT
WE DON'T CARE
WHAT IT MEANT
ANOTHER DAY
ANOTHER DEATH
ANOTHER SORROW
ANOTHER BREATH
SHALL I PUT THE KETTLE ON?
(War without end)
NO REMORSE
NO REPENT
WE DON'T CARE
WHAT IT MEANT
ANOTHER DAY
ANOTHER DEATH
ANOTHER SORROW
ANOTHER BREATH
SHALL I PUT THE KETTLE ON?
on The Corte de Bleu by GregDeEgg
20 Jan 2003, 10:23 AM
What? The shallots... bear no hair? GOOD GOD!!!!! WHAT FOUL RESTAURANT UNKNOWN TO MAN WAS THIS AT?
on some deleted poem
23 Jan 2003, 5:46 AM
lol
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 11:17 AM
big time doesn't scan
on 9/11 tribute by Caducus
23 Jan 2003, 11:29 AM
Ace use of "choke" to rhyme with "smoke"!
on Charlottesville by New Life Drug
20 Jan 2003, 10:17 AM
Hot tamales, yeah they're red hot. Yeah! She got 'em for sale!!1
on The last day of an old year by poetandknowit
23 Jan 2003, 11:53 AM
5. The way you comb your hair.
6. Your freckled nose.
7. The way you say you care.
8. Your crazy clothes.
6. Your freckled nose.
7. The way you say you care.
8. Your crazy clothes.