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Lyric № 37099

Immortalised

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

Immortalised!!!!!!!!! Born on streets of betrayal, A poet yearns to attain love, Hungry, who is for love, Instead, fed with morsels of betrayal!!!!!!!!!!! A poet?s breaths are controlled by his inspirations, His life is a gift, from his inspirations!!!!!! Some inspirations are such, The creations always leave their impact and touch, Also the poet is immortalized, Owing to his creations that mesmerized!!!!!!!!! I have few words for my inspirations, Enough have I gained, from their illuminations, They have immortalized me, Thanking them through another poem, is this poet, Poet, born on the streets of betrayal, Poet, living in hearts, true and loyal, Poet, who drinks tears of your eyes, Poet, who is immortalized!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 12.05(12)p.m. Saurabh Niranjan Turakhia 16/11/2001 Friday.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20-Jan-03/10:14 AM Reply
No mercy for what we are doing. No thought to even what we have done. We don't need to feel the sorrow. No remorse for the helpless one.

(War without end)

NO REMORSE
NO REPENT
WE DON'T CARE
WHAT IT MEANT
ANOTHER DAY
ANOTHER DEATH
ANOTHER SORROW
ANOTHER BREATH
SHALL I PUT THE KETTLE ON?