regarding some deleted poem...	18-Feb-04/4:45 PM
Your bum is insane. But the swollen knee, He's Jesu.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Feb-04/5:39 PM
You speak of freedom as if 'twere free. But a butler's freedom comes at a terrible price. Observe... Free by -=Dark_Angel=- Lurking in your master's study Straining with your cheeks so ruddy Bulging with a swollen prize Laughing as your master cries Wearing not your special diaper Taking off your auto-wiper Knowing well your bow'ls are naughty Leaking past the age of forty Breaking stool upon a chair Caring not if people stare Reaching for another wipe Soiling it with one foul swipe Smiling bum is not yet done Bulging with another one Dumping it upon the floor Cleaning up - your final chore Shov'ling stools into a cart Wailing not as they depart Coiling more whene'er you please Balming them with ev'ry squeeze Feeling separate from the world Knowing that you've over-curled Swimming in a land of cack How wonderful to just get back!
Re: The Angry Bush by wilco	19-Feb-04/2:04 PM
I feel this could be improved by substituting the final line for one ending in 'eyes'.
Re: Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey	21-Feb-04/10:57 AM
Goodbye (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey Maybe someday he'll find true love Just know "sunshine" will be watching from above. Angel (Free verse) by Butterfly1120 She to me is an angel. One sent from up above. Here to give, and not recieve, someone with so much love. The meaning of Love (Free verse) by The Slender Blade What is this? An angel in heaven? No, this is love, From the skies above. Child of my Buttocks (Lyric) by -=Dark_Angel=- For Jesu's legendary scorn Is pitiful, and flawed by Love. The greatest anguish from Above Song For My Soulmate (Lyric) by John K Have you ever seen to people madly in love? They've been given a gift from their God above. Forbidden Love (Ode) by crystal lane swift I know He is watching from above, Is our moment all a dream? Why must this be a forbidden love? Am I Good Enough? (Free verse) by crystal lane swift I want nothing more than for you to return my love. I write pretty lines for you about the heavens above. An Angel (Lyric) by broken_wing11 An angel walked thru the gates today Into His heavens up above An angel has been blessed She left us with her love A.E.G. (Free verse) by nowhereman How can you say you feel no love for me, I hold you so high above
Re: Crash & burn by Sunshine Conkey	21-Feb-04/11:03 AM
This is a disastrous poeme. It fails utterly. You fail. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Feb-04/1:02 PM
Is it indecent to eat the navel of a navel orange if the navel is so distended that it composes two-thirds of the orange's mass?
Re: Gods Musician: Grave Digger by SupremeDreamer	22-Feb-04/7:16 AM
I thought this was going to be a celebration of the 80s metal band 'Grave Digger'. Fuck you.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Feb-04/9:19 AM
http://www.classicgaming.com/splatterhouse/SH2-Boss2_dies2.jpg
Re: The Niche by Fear of Garbage	23-Feb-04/12:51 AM
A masterpiece from the "so incoherent it must be beautiful" school. -bow'ls-
Re: Windows and Mirrors by fire blade	23-Feb-04/1:00 AM
Delightfully inquisitive! -0- -10-
Re: 4 walls by tralala42001	23-Feb-04/1:09 AM
and i coiled off a 25 pounder
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Feb-04/8:50 AM
You ought to be inserted into a beefburger and compressed.
Re: Inevitable by _iamtwilight_	23-Feb-04/9:19 AM
Rewrite this from the perspective of a lobster. [8 marks]
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Feb-04/4:06 PM
Why do you continue to smear these offerings all over poemeranker like a crusted tramp leaving brownly marks upon a scrambled egg?
Re: Amateur excavators by darkshark	25-Feb-04/6:15 AM
jow'ls
Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	25-Feb-04/9:49 AM
To be sung bois'trously in Church, lewdly accomp'nied by the following tune: http://www.cyberhymnal.org/htm/g/o/goodking.htm
Re: I don't wanna be me by AskittlesK	26-Feb-04/4:56 AM
There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Feb-04/5:13 AM
Kvite good, so...
Re: Red by AskittlesK	26-Feb-04/8:45 AM
Beautiful... simply beautiful.
Re: Their Little Girl 2 by AskittlesK	27-Feb-04/4:01 PM
question... why did u put question... why did u put There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive. on one of my poems... i wrote this poem myself.. i looked it up and yes there is a song called Don't Wanna Be Me but its not the same song.. not even close.. i just thought i'd tell you this... on one of my poemes... do u not no that u can reply to a comment on the same page... i just thought i'd tell you this...