Re: a comment on Selfish by darby pyn	29-Oct-02/12:45 PM
thank you tintagiles. I'll try to fix it.
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	28-Oct-02/11:27 PM
or "Glass reactions"
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	28-Oct-02/11:25 PM
You just wrote a great melodic punk song. I got the guitar down perfect for this. you should call it "love and war"
Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford	23-Oct-02/12:00 PM
very nice. 8
Re: a comment on www.people.freenet.de/freeek/SajjadAli.swf by darby pyn	22-Oct-02/8:20 PM
Thank you horus. I had this ideal of an " interactive poem". something to exploit our medium. plus Halloween is near.
Re: a comment on The generosity of others. by darby pyn	20-Oct-02/10:40 AM
Thank you Nicholas.
Re: a comment on The generosity of others. by darby pyn	19-Oct-02/7:15 PM
very true. my rant explanation sounds like nervous laughter Im sure my ADD comment pertains to that. their is is no excuse. I just need more practice.
Re: a comment on The generosity of others. by darby pyn	19-Oct-02/4:31 PM
not long maybe an hour. mostly check for spelling errors. though you couldn't tell lately. it's like my guitar playing there is no structure it's not style it's more a spontaneous cumbustion and I would rather explode than be a conductor and suppress the moment. I have never been diagnosed but I must have add.
Re: a comment on The generosity of others. by darby pyn	19-Oct-02/3:04 PM
much better. I realy do need an editor:). thank you again.
Re: a comment on The generosity of others. by darby pyn	19-Oct-02/1:15 PM
I will try. I dont tend to write poems with positive themes well. I like to expose a situation I dislike and in that make the point about it's validity. I know it's a round the bout way but that's just the way I write. this poem is about my private school years " Baptist temple christian academy" and all the hypocrisy I saw. but I will give it a shot.
Re: a comment on regret. by darby pyn	18-Oct-02/8:27 PM
Thank you so much. I miss going to shows it's been so long the last one was dead kennedys it was great even without jello biafra.
Re: a comment on regret. by darby pyn	18-Oct-02/8:00 PM
I just saw it Im writing while listening to the buzzcocks. so Im making alot of spelling errors. sorry. p.s. I loved carmen and the devil. you and dark angel are my favorite poets on this site...yes I said dark angel.
Re: a comment on casting couch by darby pyn	18-Oct-02/2:54 PM
I hope so. shit I spelled couch wrong.oops
Re: a comment on casting couch by darby pyn	18-Oct-02/12:34 PM
it's more in the lines of the finality of the poem/song is such a defeat. you want her to wake up. it's about denial and accepting it. if somone hates the conclusion of the song so much they say I will never be that person then the ends justify the means.
Re: a comment on casting couch by darby pyn	17-Oct-02/9:16 PM
it anoys so many people the way I write. either rhyme or dont. but this one in paticular is a punk song played very fast. so I don't catch these rule of writing imperfections at conception. sorry. I do appreciate your comments.
Re: Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w	19-Sep-02/1:00 AM
I let loose a night's worth of drinking on the neck and hair of an unsuspecting girl at a Green Day show and slowly left before she noticed. your poem brings all that back. thank you. should loose read the news and end on "paid my dues". still nice. 8
Re: a comment on Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn	19-Sep-02/12:41 AM
" Whisper to a scream". I forgot about that damn song.
Re: a comment on untitled#3 by darby pyn	19-Sep-02/12:33 AM
I like pee. :)
Re: a comment on Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn	12-Sep-02/3:06 PM
good point. I forgot about that song. I should have called it " Not in front of the kids". as in pool I shoot too quick before thinking.
Re: a comment on untitled#3 by darby pyn	10-Sep-02/1:53 AM
It's simple. a story comes to me, I put it on paper, if I like it I expose it. being clever is not an option my vocabulary is basic and the process is too fast. but I understand this is a site full of criticism and praise and both are needed to grow.