Poemranker [20 most recent comments by elderking (21-40) and replies]

on we hold hands when i sleep by hendrimike 31 Dec 2005, 8:24 PM

reading it made me feel achy? an empty longing? something along those lines I can't put into words.
I liked all but the last 3 lines.

replying on ghost host by elderking 31 Dec 2005, 8:19 PM

Thank you, Prince. I wrote it many years ago and it remained unfinished until the day I posted it here. The Ghost stop visiting too. Thanks for your comment and Happy New Year!

replying on ghost host by elderking 31 Dec 2005, 8:13 PM

Right back at you, Amanda! As far as my "heart's desire"...he doesn't even have a clue yet...maybe the new year will bring me some courage to speak of it to him, ya think?? My ghost visits me seldom these days:>)

on when i met sky alone by Prince of Void 30 Dec 2005, 9:48 AM

I was just starting to become interested; then read the last line and it was lost.

on My Interesting Life by Dovina 30 Dec 2005, 9:44 AM

out all of yours I've read, I think this is the best.
I liked.

replying on listen by elderking 26 Nov 2005, 1:53 PM

True enough! Thanks.

replying on listen by elderking 26 Nov 2005, 1:52 PM

Thanks!

replying on listen by elderking 26 Nov 2005, 1:51 PM

I figured if I was wordy enough, he might "hear" what I was saying. I figured out after awhile he was pretty much "deaf".
Thanks for the comment.

on Waiting For The Light To Change by elderking 22 Nov 2005, 5:19 PM

Oops sorry; I didn't intend for that to happen. What did I do wrong?

on Mending by elderking 22 Nov 2005, 4:28 PM

Thanks for the comments. I've always had a little trouble knowing when the piece is "complete" or if it still needs some work. This piece I've been writing and rewriting for over 10 yrs!

on Waiting For The Light To Change by elderking 22 Nov 2005, 4:15 PM

Dovina- Thanks. It's mostly a true story that happened to me a few summers ago. That guy was bizarre! Thanks for your comments and interest. elderking

on Due Consideration by Dovina 22 Nov 2005, 4:11 PM

excellent; the last stanza (is that the correct word?)
is simple and clear (a 'lesson' I could stand to learn!)
elderking

replying on the smallest box will do by elderking 14 Jul 2005, 3:05 PM

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
C.O.D. a term used by the Post Office some years ago. It was a service (Cash On Delivery) where no mailing or shipping costs were paid until the pkg reached it's destination. Who ever recieved the pkg paid all costs immediately upon delivery.
Definitely shows my age knowing that stuff!

on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco 4 Jul 2005, 1:28 PM

It makes my heart hurt and that's a good thing.
very good.

on Drowsy by elderking 4 Jul 2005, 1:13 PM

Thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to read
it. I appreciate it.elderking