Re: we hold hands when i sleep by hendrimike	31-Dec-05/8:24 PM
reading it made me feel achy? an empty longing? something along those lines I can't put into words. I liked all but the last 3 lines.
Re: a comment on ghost host by elderking	31-Dec-05/8:19 PM
Thank you, Prince. I wrote it many years ago and it remained unfinished until the day I posted it here. The Ghost stop visiting too. Thanks for your comment and Happy New Year!
Re: a comment on ghost host by elderking	31-Dec-05/8:13 PM
Right back at you, Amanda! As far as my "heart's desire"...he doesn't even have a clue yet...maybe the new year will bring me some courage to speak of it to him, ya think?? My ghost visits me seldom these days:>)
Re: when i met sky alone by Prince of Void	30-Dec-05/9:48 AM
I was just starting to become interested; then read the last line and it was lost.
Re: My Interesting Life by Dovina	30-Dec-05/9:44 AM
out all of yours I've read, I think this is the best. I liked.
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	26-Nov-05/1:53 PM
True enough! Thanks.
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	26-Nov-05/1:52 PM
Thanks!
Re: a comment on listen by elderking	26-Nov-05/1:51 PM
I figured if I was wordy enough, he might "hear" what I was saying. I figured out after awhile he was pretty much "deaf". Thanks for the comment.
Re: Waiting For The Light To Change by elderking	22-Nov-05/5:19 PM
Oops sorry; I didn't intend for that to happen. What did I do wrong?
Re: Mending by elderking	22-Nov-05/4:28 PM
Thanks for the comments. I've always had a little trouble knowing when the piece is "complete" or if it still needs some work. This piece I've been writing and rewriting for over 10 yrs!
Re: Waiting For The Light To Change by elderking	22-Nov-05/4:15 PM
Dovina- Thanks. It's mostly a true story that happened to me a few summers ago. That guy was bizarre! Thanks for your comments and interest. elderking
Re: Due Consideration by Dovina	22-Nov-05/4:11 PM
excellent; the last stanza (is that the correct word?) is simple and clear (a 'lesson' I could stand to learn!) elderking
Re: a comment on the smallest box will do by elderking	14-Jul-05/3:05 PM
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. C.O.D. a term used by the Post Office some years ago. It was a service (Cash On Delivery) where no mailing or shipping costs were paid until the pkg reached it's destination. Who ever recieved the pkg paid all costs immediately upon delivery. Definitely shows my age knowing that stuff!
Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco	4-Jul-05/1:28 PM
It makes my heart hurt and that's a good thing. very good.
Re: Drowsy by elderking	4-Jul-05/1:13 PM
Thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to read it. I appreciate it.elderking