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Mending (Free verse) by elderking
I never knew together could really mean alone, when love's an empty tapestry of promises unsown. It once seemed so easy, not so long ago, when love was sweet embroidery we weren't afraid to show. Now the stitches loosen loving's fragile thread, knotting doubt securely in all we leave unsaid. Our passion has grown thin patched in hurried, thoughtless ways. So carelessly untended our love, unmended, frays.

Up the ladder: A DANCE OF NO TUNE
Down the ladder: WITH GOD , NOT THEM (11)

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.905148
Overall Rank: 9722
Posted: July 21, 2005 4:22 PM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2005 4:22 PM PDT
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[n/a] elderking @ 209.79.199.151 | 22-Nov-05/4:28 PM | Reply
Thanks for the comments. I've always had a little trouble knowing when the piece is "complete" or if it still needs some work. This piece I've been writing and rewriting for over 10 yrs!
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