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book drop here (Free verse) by A. Nomaly community
charge
placement
machine (credit card swipe)
100 free minutes
started already
home allowed (loud)
dog bites hard
I can't take you home anymore
so fickle
a burned case (not afraid)
every Tues. and Thurs.
Up the ladder:
Touching time
Down the ladder:
The First One
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Posted: July 27, 2006 1:35 PM PDT; Last modified: July 27, 2006 1:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.905148 Overall Rank: 9737 Comments:
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Dovina @ 12.72.37.18
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27-Jul-06/3:16 PM
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Your last one, with its funky mis-grammar, made sense to me, but this one doesn't. It looks like as collection of scattered thoughts.
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A. Nomaly @ 67.136.160.45
> Dovina
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30-Jul-06/2:53 PM
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it's about collection and building, the use and building of credit, platforms for understanding and conceptualizing people, relationships, items, existence, how thought thin they are (fickle and easily burned), so urgent and necessary (like tuesday and thursday), it gets personal
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