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book drop here (Free verse) by A. Nomaly

community charge placement machine (credit card swipe) 100 free minutes started already home allowed (loud) dog bites hard I can't take you home anymore so fickle a burned case (not afraid) every Tues. and Thurs.

Dovina 27-Jul-06/3:16 PM
Your last one, with its funky mis-grammar, made sense to me, but this one doesn't. It looks like as collection of scattered thoughts.




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