Re: a comment on Nonsense POEM #14687 by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	20-Jun-05/1:02 PM
only people I've ever heard say "cuppa" were from New Zealand.
Re: a comment on Father’s Day by Dovina	20-Jun-05/11:46 AM
a poem that intends to teach isn't by its nature a bad thing.
Re: a comment on Nonsense POEM #14687 by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	20-Jun-05/9:47 AM
you couldn't be more wrong. I thought long and hard over whether it should be an elephant or an orangutan..or a yellow line... and waiting for crepes or waffles... actually.. I never thought anything. bravo.
Re: a comment on grin and stand by celticskatermatt1	19-Jun-05/7:59 PM
you're right.. this guy could be screwed for the foreseeable future....and we will have to simply hope he will start to write his poetry in a Word Document with red underlines.
Re: Naughty Poems (R) by untamed_fierce	19-Jun-05/7:41 PM
http://www.lotsofjokes.com/cat_312.htm They Are plagiarized. Here is a sight with all of the above located on the same page.
Re: Being Alone by Sunshine Conkey	19-Jun-05/7:33 PM
I was trying to figure out the rhyme scheme. I see in the first two stanzas you rhyme lines 2 and 4. Then a five line 5th stanza with a rhyme in lines 3 and 4. was this the plan?
Re: a comment on Father’s Day by Dovina	19-Jun-05/7:27 PM
Caught up in worrying about dying, and coping with change in all aspects of culture and technology, never helped anyone's disposition... but I agree that it is an avoidable trap.
Re: Father’s Day by Dovina	19-Jun-05/7:17 PM
I disagree with your premise. I am sorry you aren't aware of many old men that don't fit this stereotype. I'll try not to write about a woman's relationship with her mother to avoid the same trap.
Re: grin and stand by celticskatermatt1	19-Jun-05/5:46 PM
spell check.
Re: a comment on White Stork by Blue Magpie	19-Jun-05/5:40 PM
just leave out the word subtler, or quieter, in line seven. it shortens the line a bit, but gives it a good rhythm.
Re: a comment on Nonsense POEM #14687 by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	19-Jun-05/2:49 PM
gosh. never heard of traditional nonsense poetry.
Re: All in Love by gothiclovepoetiss	18-Jun-05/11:05 PM
sometimes feelings lie
Re: It Could Be Worse by smiffy84	18-Jun-05/5:03 PM
Blair Witched?
Re: Kiss Me by smiffy84	18-Jun-05/5:02 PM
take you where?
Re: At The End by lil_evil_boi	18-Jun-05/5:00 PM
no
Re: This or That by sacred_poet_me	18-Jun-05/4:56 PM
Romantics Facing Reality -- meetings at 8PM at the International Order of Oddfellows Hall.
Re: Diary of sorrow.... by dantron	18-Jun-05/4:53 PM
you're spelling is awesome.
Re: a comment on Feed The War Machine by smiffy84	18-Jun-05/4:47 PM
I still blame them for not understanding what training with a rifle ultimately means.
Re: a comment on Sisyphus' wife by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	18-Jun-05/12:33 PM
That is precisely where I got those words... Miles Davis.
Re: Feed The War Machine by smiffy84	17-Jun-05/11:47 PM
most generals I've seen (excluding Stormin' Norman) are not fat.. they are quite trim, in fact. We all have to die. Nobody makes anybody enlist in the armed services anymore. It's like saying "My life is not worth preserving" when you sign up.