Re: Heaven or Hell by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/4:56 PM |
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Re: True Love by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/4:57 PM |
Excellent...yet a few rough spots. Overall great~
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Re: Where I'm From by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/4:57 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jun-05/5:19 PM |
Nice nice nice nice nice!
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Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/5:20 PM |
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Re: True Love by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/5:22 PM |
You really described 'love' well. ANd the rhyming really emphasize the point. I think this is the best poem I have ever read since i registered on this website. Your work is thoughtful and I can see your ideas and thoughts in it. Bravo!
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6-Jun-05/5:34 PM |
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Re: The world's shortest poem by ALChemy |
6-Jun-05/5:35 PM |
Short but meaningful. SOmetimes a few words (in this case 2) can really express the author's feeling well. This poem is a good example. Good!
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Re: Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe |
6-Jun-05/5:38 PM |
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Re: Soldier by kev_wannabe |
6-Jun-05/5:39 PM |
Comparing to 'Bunnie Crazy In Love' this one kinda suck...no offense, but I find this poem uninteresting and lacks interests. You should try to spice it up a little. This masterpiece shows that sometimes great poets can write unpowerful poems too. But, good try!
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Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/8:53 PM |
WOW. THis song is lovely. <8>
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Re: sunset by celticskatermatt1 |
8-Jun-05/7:04 PM |
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Re: The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi |
15-Jun-05/9:38 PM |
I love the repetition of the question and the yes. Also you've described each of autumn's personality really well. I think you deserve a -9-
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Re: Beach Volleyball by lil_evil_boi |
15-Jun-05/9:40 PM |
I dont know what to give you here. I think this poem is too simple and I think it needs more creativity. So I'll give you a 5. Not bad not good.
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Re: Yellow Am I by lil_evil_boi |
15-Jun-05/9:42 PM |
You make yellow sound so holy and powerful. Why did you choose yellow? Just out of curiosity. BTW...-8-
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