on Snow by lil_evil_boi
6 Jun 2005, 5:20 PM
WOW! I'm speechless!
on Heaven or Hell by lil_evil_boi
6 Jun 2005, 4:56 PM
Spectacular...
on True Love by lil_evil_boi
6 Jun 2005, 4:57 PM
Excellent...yet a few rough spots. Overall great~
on Where I'm From by lil_evil_boi
6 Jun 2005, 4:57 PM
Love it!
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2005, 5:19 PM
Nice nice nice nice nice!
on True Love by lil_evil_boi
6 Jun 2005, 5:22 PM
You really described 'love' well. ANd the rhyming really emphasize the point. I think this is the best poem I have ever read since i registered on this website. Your work is thoughtful and I can see your ideas and thoughts in it. Bravo!
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2005, 5:34 PM
BOO!!
on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy
6 Jun 2005, 5:35 PM
Short but meaningful. SOmetimes a few words (in this case 2) can really express the author's feeling well. This poem is a good example. Good!
on Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe
6 Jun 2005, 5:38 PM
WOW. You're good!
on Soldier by kev_wannabe
6 Jun 2005, 5:39 PM
Comparing to 'Bunnie Crazy In Love' this one kinda suck...no offense, but I find this poem uninteresting and lacks interests. You should try to spice it up a little. This masterpiece shows that sometimes great poets can write unpowerful poems too. But, good try!
on sunset by celticskatermatt1
8 Jun 2005, 7:04 PM
Touching. Bravo.
on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike
7 Jun 2005, 8:53 PM
WOW. THis song is lovely. <8>
on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi
15 Jun 2005, 9:38 PM
I love the repetition of the question and the yes. Also you've described each of autumn's personality really well. I think you deserve a -9-
on Beach Volleyball by lil_evil_boi
15 Jun 2005, 9:40 PM
I dont know what to give you here. I think this poem is too simple and I think it needs more creativity. So I'll give you a 5. Not bad not good.
on Yellow Am I by lil_evil_boi
15 Jun 2005, 9:42 PM
You make yellow sound so holy and powerful. Why did you choose yellow? Just out of curiosity. BTW...-8-