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sunset (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 sunset at my back
cold mist of love in my face
hand in hand we walk across the sand
the oceans tide creeps up the beach
when i stare at ur eyes
you stare at mine
we lean closer, watering pupils
a tear trickels down my face
u wipe my cheek
and kiss me gently
Up the ladder:
Tulips and Roses
Down the ladder:
Tree of Life
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Posted: June 8, 2005 4:59 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2005 4:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8466 Comments:
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sacred_poet_me @ 70.68.76.244
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8-Jun-05/7:04 PM
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Touching. Bravo.
Why did you ruin this with this ridiculous 'ur' and 'u'? You want to be cool hip? Write EVERYTHING phonetically and digi lingo then. All teenyboppers will be so touched as to shower you with Tens.
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