sunset

Member since 2004 · Posted 8 Jun 2005 · 2 comments

sunset at my back cold mist of love in my face hand in hand we walk across the sand the oceans tide creeps up the beach when i stare at ur eyes you stare at mine we lean closer, watering pupils a tear trickels down my face u wipe my cheek and kiss me gently

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[7] sacred_poet_me 8-Jun-05/7:04 PM Reply

Touching. Bravo.

[6] deleted user 8-Jun-05/11:08 PM Reply

Why did you ruin this with this ridiculous 'ur' and 'u'? You want to be cool hip? Write EVERYTHING phonetically and digi lingo then. All teenyboppers will be so touched as to shower you with Tens.