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5-Oct-02/12:47 AM |
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| Re: I Dig a Ponytail by Doris & Oats by w~* ATHENA *~w |
5-Oct-02/12:51 AM |
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did we, or didnt we? that is the question, whether tis noblier in the mind to sit in a wok on an icy hill or to suffer the slings and arrows of outrageous misfortune
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| Re: Parallel by aperfecttool77 |
5-Oct-02/12:52 AM |
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hmmmmm, well any girl that is worth all that effort... probably isnt. dump that bitch and find a nice homely girl that will treat you the way you should be treated
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5-Oct-02/12:55 AM |
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I realllly feel like youve personified nature, i am the tree, i am the rainforest, i am Captain Planet! and i do need your love before i become extint too, any offers? any dendrofeliacs out there?
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| Re: The TRust That Was Unreal by wootness |
5-Oct-02/12:57 AM |
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| Re: God and Country by dougsoderstrom |
5-Oct-02/1:00 AM |
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religion and government suck, they will end up killing us all, i wish they would go away, nah, i wish i could go away, live on an island, bring some friends, it would be good times, and no government and church to fuck things up, yeah right like that would happen, i would probably just get invaded and some gov or church would try to occupy my utopia, fuck them fuck them all i wish they would die, god, shit, this sucks, not the poem, the situation
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| Re: Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w |
5-Oct-02/1:02 AM |
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hmm, this seems pretty pointless, why would you write about it, give it a twist, did you kill anyone? or do drugs? make it interesting to the common man!
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| Re: Can't See by ThoughtfulSoul |
5-Oct-02/1:04 AM |
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well how bout i tell you who to kill and you do it then! we would make a great team, and then when you tell the cops it wasnt you, you had someone telling you what to do, you couldnt point me out in a line up! damn this is just too perfect!
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| Re: In Full Stop by vulcan |
5-Oct-02/1:05 AM |
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aww really strange, too vague and strange for me to comprehend, shit its late, i will just give it a 5, in case it might be good and im just tostupid to seeit
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| Re: The Sky by jauser |
5-Oct-02/1:06 AM |
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hmm, will i? who are you to say? i dont think i will so there!!!
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5-Oct-02/1:07 AM |
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god, that was a lot of words to read
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| Re: Wondering Soul by Katie |
5-Oct-02/1:09 AM |
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inkling? thats a cool word, and katie is a cool name, but you over do itwith wastrel, and respite, thats a little much too. i wont even get started on blithe, come now, please
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| Re: Cheap Thrills by Owner of the Sky |
5-Oct-02/1:11 AM |
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well when you die you will get your #, the line will be very fucking long, and yeah, its a cheap thrill, anything with as much hype as he's been getting is bound to be
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5-Oct-02/1:11 AM |
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lips, hands, minds curling together, fun stuff
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5-Oct-02/1:12 AM |
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| Re: There is a pea in my bed by w~* ATHENA *~w |
5-Oct-02/1:13 AM |
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this is cool, it ryhmes a lot and is easy to read
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| Re: Raw Suicide by royalflesh |
5-Oct-02/1:13 AM |
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nice use of the word schmuck
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| Re: Pigeons at the end of winter by mikejedw |
5-Oct-02/1:39 AM |
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hmm, i wish this sort of poetry interested me so i could praise this poem, but i do not connect, sorry, the porn star sonnet was a slam dunk though
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| Re: #16 by mikejedw |
5-Oct-02/1:42 AM |
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again, i cant relate, maybe if you wrote more about porn or stars, or porn stars!
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6-Oct-02/1:49 AM |
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this poem is very... brazen of you, Brazen
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