Re: Summer Day by Tekara	11-Sep-02/12:31 AM
hmm, too plain for my taste, sure i can picture myself in the scene but do i really want to be there? a cat? bright day? cloudy? sidewalk? id rather be surfing
Re: terrorism and break dancing by w~* ATHENA *~w	11-Sep-02/12:33 AM
nice poem... i suppose. i like the eminem mention, hes funny, but his last name is mathers
Re: Lavendar Gate by <~>	11-Sep-02/12:36 AM
hmm, boring, journeyman? quest? sounds like too many role playing games?
Re: Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8	5-Oct-02/12:38 AM
an exciting journey through the mind of a mad man, reminds me of brad pitts character in tweleve monkies
Re: PainFul Of LiFe by PoEt MaStEr	5-Oct-02/12:41 AM
why dont you die and then i can survey people to see if they care or not! it will be some good empirical data for your ponderance as to whether anyone cares
Re: No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni	5-Oct-02/12:43 AM
i used to write like this, then i realized how retarded it is and was was and i got better to be seen without not being and everyone saw how it was with the light of what was and what is and what the fuck am i saying