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16-May-02/9:22 AM |
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Rhyming might help the flow.
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| Re: Sloth and Expectation by ifni |
16-May-02/9:23 AM |
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You could deliver such a profound idea in a more tasteful way.
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| Re: My Dark by crims0ngh0st |
16-May-02/9:24 AM |
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Cut out the unecessary crap.
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| Re: Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined |
16-May-02/9:26 AM |
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16-May-02/9:27 AM |
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
16-May-02/9:29 AM |
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It has no relation to Ozymandias. Seems Coleridge's Mariner rhyme scheme can be used very effectively. Great job.
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| Re: Vigor Mortis by WarrenGDawg |
16-May-02/9:30 AM |
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| Re: fuck you by gsosville |
3-Jun-02/9:31 AM |
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| Re: Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
13-Jun-02/4:04 PM |
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13-Jun-02/4:09 PM |
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How are bagels Jewish? Dark_Angel quit being Jewish.
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| Re: Seasonal Memories by ErgoErgun |
20-Jul-02/9:19 AM |
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My inspiration seems to come in a variety of forms, some of which, like this piece, seem more in tune with this audience's tastes. If you liked this poem I'd advise you to take at what I just submitted entitled "Volkswagon." Thanks for your comments, it's nice to see something uplifting against the negative dribble people usually proffer.
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| Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8 |
24-Jul-02/6:04 PM |
You're into theatre? Have you checked out any of Sondheim's musical productions?
Oh, the poem... um... 6.
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| Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun |
27-Aug-02/5:36 PM |
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| Re: Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun |
28-Aug-02/12:39 AM |
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| Re: Untitled by ErgoErgun |
28-Aug-02/1:06 AM |
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Delightfuly tangy yet unrefined.
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| Re: Volkswagon by ErgoErgun |
28-Aug-02/3:12 AM |
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I enjoy your comments. What a wonderful relationship. =]
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| Re: Living Conditions by Christof |
27-Nov-02/9:28 PM |
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This poem belongs in a nursery with other wreckless idiots who have no balls and spew shit from their mouths and asses whenever they see fit. This poem sucks. If you like it, you suck. Christof: grow some fucking balls before you to decide to piss in Microsoft Word, thanks.
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| Re: Work by poetandknowit |
27-Nov-02/9:34 PM |
Change your name to IFUCKINGSUCK. This reads like a pathetic proxy for a 2pac rap, mixed with some piss and shit you found lying in your stack of unpublished poems. If you pride yourself on this consider going through puberty, growing a pair, then writing about something that isn't bromidic. Oh, and get rid of the shit you use for fountain pens and the stale piss you use for ink. Thanks bitch,
Love ErgoErgun
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| Re: The ABC's Of Adultery by horus8 |
12-Dec-04/4:27 PM |
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the catalogue serves the perspective to perfection
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