A masterpiece of biting social commentary on the state of the public schooling system combined with a mature expression of lust from one person towards another.

like this poem, you are a piece of shit

This poem stank on ice, much like the rest of yours. I get the feeling that half the other juvenile delinquents here are friends of yours. PLEASE go back to school for a while and stop leaving these rat droppings here.

you are fucking brilliant

yuck

This is the worst poem I've ever seen. Not onlydoes the grammar suck, you can't spell eather.

oh master.. i can feel the stiffness of your member telekineticly pulling up my shorts. you have a gift. sell it. package it . fuckyour schoolteacher. design cookies..oh master 10

O-K?

What's this i see. dual chemistry. in two places at once. i put a piece of rye bread in my cupboard at the age of twelve. week later scraped the mold. made lsd. mold is ergot. parasite. st.anthony's fire. grows on rye during humid and hot springs and autumns. causes gangrene and loss of various body parts if not treated properly after fatal ingestion. you are fatal. but you will pass. they all pass.

what has been raped here is the art form of Haiku. Are you trying to piss off the japanese?

No, piss on.

People are angered by the expression of violent acts, they are fools who don't understand the spirit of art.

an interesting delve into our collective roots... primitive yet sophisticated, like toast that is really really old but still tasty.