poemranker ::Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun

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Haiku № 1649

Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner

by ErgoErgun

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 14 comments

Want fuck school teacher. She say, "No! You can't fuck me!" So raped her instead.

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14 comments

[10] WarrenGDawg 11-May-02/11:12 PM Reply
A masterpiece of biting social commentary on the state of the public schooling system combined with a mature expression of lust from one person towards another.
[0] anonymous 12-May-02/4:52 PM Reply
like this poem, you are a piece of shit
[0] anonymous 16-May-02/4:36 PM Reply
This poem stank on ice, much like the rest of yours. I get the feeling that half the other juvenile delinquents here are friends of yours. PLEASE go back to school for a while and stop leaving these rat droppings here.
[n/a] gsosville 31-May-02/8:14 AM Reply
you are fucking brilliant
[0] pkdrunner 18-Jul-02/3:31 PM Reply
yuck
[0] susie 20-Jul-02/3:28 AM Reply
This is the worst poem I've ever seen. Not onlydoes the grammar suck, you can't spell eather.
[10] renwick › susie 15-Sep-02/6:50 PM Reply
You can't spell EITHER.
[10] horus8 24-Jul-02/12:47 AM Reply
oh master.. i can feel the stiffness of your member telekineticly pulling up my shorts. you have a gift. sell it. package it . fuckyour schoolteacher. design cookies..oh master 10
[0] Amelia 25-Jul-02/8:04 AM Reply
O-K?
[10] horus8 29-Jul-02/4:00 PM Reply
What's this i see. dual chemistry. in two places at once. i put a piece of rye bread in my cupboard at the age of twelve. week later scraped the mold. made lsd. mold is ergot. parasite. st.anthony's fire. grows on rye during humid and hot springs and autumns. causes gangrene and loss of various body parts if not treated properly after fatal ingestion. you are fatal. but you will pass. they all pass.
[0] Robert K Foster 14-Aug-02/9:05 AM Reply
what has been raped here is the art form of Haiku. Are you trying to piss off the japanese?
[n/a] ErgoErgun 28-Aug-02/12:39 AM Reply
No, piss on.
[10] renwick 15-Sep-02/6:52 PM Reply
People are angered by the expression of violent acts, they are fools who don't understand the spirit of art.
[7] skaskowski 15-Sep-02/10:01 PM Reply
an interesting delve into our collective roots... primitive yet sophisticated, like toast that is really really old but still tasty.