| Re: a comment on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams |
10-Sep-06/4:02 PM |
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Britt I have one word for you, Lame.
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| Re: The Forgetting by Dovina |
7-Jan-06/4:03 AM |
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My grandmother had Alzheimer's, I wish it was as simple as you portrait it here.
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| Re: a comment on Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams |
26-Mar-05/6:07 PM |
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you have to be kidding me...
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| Re: a comment on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams |
13-Mar-05/5:54 AM |
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arn't we just the comedian
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| Re: a comment on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams |
12-Mar-05/11:00 AM |
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I would provide a link but I can't give you a link to my pictures I create in my mind. I can tell you what I was thinking about when I wrote this poem. A butterfly garden with a stream running through the center. Filled with the obviouse. Sitting on a bench just drawing nature around you untill night fall.
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| Re: Harry & the Little Bird by Goad |
2-Feb-05/3:04 PM |
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I went to college in Schnectady.
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
2-Feb-05/2:55 PM |
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Yawn....you really are unoriginal aren't you!
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
2-Feb-05/2:45 PM |
Just because a line is similar to that poem does not mean I have to change it. The meaning is different, and besides many poems may have similar lines its when the whole poem is similar where I would start to question the writer. For Example...
San Francisco Blues 'by Jack Kerouac' one of the lines reads like this... "In the calm & peaceful
Night-"
In this poem 'by Kit McCallum' the line reads like this..."The peaceful calm of night."
So you're telling me one of these people has to change their poem because it is very similar to other persons poem?
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
1-Feb-05/10:00 AM |
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Actully I had no idea about that superfamous line, 'She walks in beauty, like the night'. And no i've never read that poem in school or outside of school.
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
31-Jan-05/11:06 PM |
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and i titled it 'depth of illusion' because if they say a picture is worth a thousand words, then a painting must be worth a million.
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| Re: Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy |
31-Jan-05/9:06 PM |
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fucked w/out a kiss thats what you get
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| Re: My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy |
31-Jan-05/9:04 PM |
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I hate "now you lay in the flame". And whats so shamefull about hugging the toilet, i've done that a million times gotten up wiped my mouth and drank some more. I'm proud of my drinking binges!
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| Re: Ode to Brittanyy and her Dyke Jacket. by DreamerSupreme |
31-Jan-05/8:57 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
31-Jan-05/7:20 PM |
Here do you think this is better
I hope it gets your panties wetter
This may come as quite a shock
I am a chick therefor I have no cock!
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
31-Jan-05/5:41 PM |
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considering this poem has nothing to do w/ a man you have to be referring to yourself
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| Re: Never Said Thank You by unouluvme |
31-Jan-05/5:03 PM |
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Yes I agree you have lack of thought in this poem. If you're going to write a poem that everybody writes about you have knock it out of ball feild to make it stand alone and seprate it from the rest. You failed to do that in this poem.
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| Re: POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy |
31-Jan-05/4:59 PM |
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way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
31-Jan-05/4:48 PM |
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Yup I agree, I don't usually write poems w/ rhyme, but this sort of came to me and I havn't worked out all the small kinks yet. But I still feel it has some great potential.
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
31-Jan-05/12:44 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
31-Jan-05/11:12 AM |
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What the hell are you talking about?
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