| Re: Math Poem by Dovina |
20-Dec-04/7:50 PM |
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Creative and unique. I'm tempted to say this poem wasn't my style, but Iâm reserved at saying that too. I've never came across a mathematical poem before. It is as I had mentioned before very unique......
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20-Dec-04/9:41 PM |
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Great description of this wonderful world...enchanted melodies...I agree I could read this poem over and over and still be left with a smile on my face.
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| Re: Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears |
20-Dec-04/9:48 PM |
I thought this poem portrayed the meaning very well....It's pretty obvious you're talking about your feelings, 'But I've learned to black out the sky'--Meaning you are holding back and forgetting, almost like one pushes into the darkness of their mind "pain".
This is how I found the poem to be...Maybe a little easily read for me. I mean it has a nice forefront but the inner being of it has been said a million times by other poets. The idea wasn't very original.
Over all though I liked it
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| Re: Blue Executioner by Caducus |
6-Jan-05/9:39 AM |
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| Re: A Picture For Danny by Caducus |
17-Jan-05/11:19 AM |
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I always love reading your poems, you actully inspired me to me write one of my poems 'Religious Slaughter'. But this by far the best poem I have read by you :)
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| Re: Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams |
17-Jan-05/11:42 AM |
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Then would you give me a suggestion on how to better this poem?
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| Re: POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy |
31-Jan-05/4:59 PM |
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way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.
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| Re: Never Said Thank You by unouluvme |
31-Jan-05/5:03 PM |
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Yes I agree you have lack of thought in this poem. If you're going to write a poem that everybody writes about you have knock it out of ball feild to make it stand alone and seprate it from the rest. You failed to do that in this poem.
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| Re: Ode to Brittanyy and her Dyke Jacket. by DreamerSupreme |
31-Jan-05/8:57 PM |
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| Re: My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy |
31-Jan-05/9:04 PM |
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I hate "now you lay in the flame". And whats so shamefull about hugging the toilet, i've done that a million times gotten up wiped my mouth and drank some more. I'm proud of my drinking binges!
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| Re: Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy |
31-Jan-05/9:06 PM |
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fucked w/out a kiss thats what you get
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| Re: Harry & the Little Bird by Goad |
2-Feb-05/3:04 PM |
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I went to college in Schnectady.
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| Re: The Forgetting by Dovina |
7-Jan-06/4:03 AM |
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My grandmother had Alzheimer's, I wish it was as simple as you portrait it here.
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