Re: Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams	17-Jan-05/11:42 AM
Then would you give me a suggestion on how to better this poem?
Re: a comment on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams	17-Jan-05/11:25 AM
the only point i was trying to make was this person who feels alone , mind you he's a bum is watching the world pass him by. He is envious at first. Untill he realizes the people "laughing hyenas" are all fake, and that their life is fake. So he now has peace in his own skin--not plastic and with a life full of lies
Re: A Picture For Danny by Caducus	17-Jan-05/11:19 AM
I always love reading your poems, you actully inspired me to me write one of my poems 'Religious Slaughter'. But this by far the best poem I have read by you :)
Re: a comment on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams	15-Jan-05/3:00 PM
I had a different ending to this but I wasn't sure if it dragged on where it could have ended where I have ended it. The original ending made it not so much of a romantic poem and i thought it gave to much away.
Re: Blue Executioner by Caducus	6-Jan-05/9:39 AM
nicely written
Re: a comment on Forgotten Strokes by Beyond_Dreams	21-Dec-04/1:52 PM
I had to edit it about the blank canvas part. Other wise you have to look past the "canvas" part of the poem. It's about a person depressed trying to fit in "palette decorated" her makeup "nightmarish dreams" gothic Her memories are of before with the evening dining and star lit sparkled eyes. That describes her old memories of joy. Manifested demons trying unworldly times.....nothing is going right. Her tears over flowing into the puddle she’s all alone.....
Re: a comment on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams	21-Dec-04/10:51 AM
'tumulus' is spelled correctly
Re: a comment on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams	20-Dec-04/10:52 PM
Thank you :)
Re: Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears	20-Dec-04/9:48 PM
I thought this poem portrayed the meaning very well....It's pretty obvious you're talking about your feelings, 'But I've learned to black out the sky'--Meaning you are holding back and forgetting, almost like one pushes into the darkness of their mind "pain". This is how I found the poem to be...Maybe a little easily read for me. I mean it has a nice forefront but the inner being of it has been said a million times by other poets. The idea wasn't very original. Over all though I liked it
Re: Math Poem by Dovina	20-Dec-04/7:50 PM
Creative and unique. I'm tempted to say this poem wasn't my style, but I’m reserved at saying that too. I've never came across a mathematical poem before. It is as I had mentioned before very unique......
Re: a comment on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams	20-Dec-04/6:28 PM
Are you referring to the spelling?
Re: a comment on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams	20-Dec-04/6:24 PM
It's not so much Iraq specifically but Iraq is a good example. It's more of a general outlook on the world right now and state of it.
Re: a comment on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams	20-Dec-04/4:41 PM
It's sad that the events in history, where so many people died was about the religious crusades and even sadder is the fact that it is about to happen again, and the thoughts behind it came to mind as I watch the news daily. I hope that gave you little insight on this poem.