| Re: a comment on we hold hands when i sleep by hendrimike |
30-Dec-05/12:51 PM |
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it's not completely about love. and it's a song. it's more about the longing for a love and how it is a one way street during the day and it is only realized at night though dreams.
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| Re: ghost host by elderking |
30-Dec-05/10:20 AM |
so many nights i've spent sleepless,
keeping company with your ghost
sweet
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| Re: a comment on it's damp after closing by hendrimike |
1-Dec-05/12:07 PM |
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| Re: Be Free Ye by D. $ Fontera |
10-Sep-05/2:35 PM |
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| Re: Moving Out by jessicazee |
10-Sep-05/2:34 PM |
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| Re: I Love You (song) by TLRufener |
10-Sep-05/2:28 PM |
this would be the longest song ever recorded. also, i don't think that the flow works when you go from: i want you to know that it's true, that i love you.
whatever...
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
2-Sep-05/6:54 AM |
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| Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
30-Aug-05/6:46 PM |
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| Re: Thoughts by drnick |
18-Aug-05/7:16 PM |
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| Re: a comment on she sits back and judges me by hendrimike |
31-Jul-05/12:46 PM |
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i completely changed this poem from it's early days of f you f you f you to this...i don't know if it is better, but whatever
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
19-Jul-05/3:00 PM |
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i should have been born in the thirties, i guess. i'm a throwback...
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| Re: a comment on she sits back and judges me by hendrimike |
18-Jul-05/10:54 AM |
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yup, that's it...on a whim and pissed
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
17-Jul-05/2:40 PM |
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i just thought that nickel flowed better into the word in. "quarter in the machine..." i don't like it. same with dollar.
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| Re: a comment on fireflies die too by hendrimike |
27-Jun-05/9:54 PM |
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| Re: Yellow Am I by lil_evil_boi |
10-Jun-05/12:55 AM |
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yellow seems like a simple kind of guy
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
10-Jun-05/12:44 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams |
7-Jun-05/9:57 PM |
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| Re: An Unusual Elegy by psychedelic |
7-Jun-05/9:16 PM |
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| Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/9:11 PM |
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what's up with the voting/rank system on this site...my votes disappeared
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/8:29 PM |
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i am in my mid-twenties...i wrote it as a song...got to learn that geetar though
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