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fireflies die too (Free verse) by hendrimike
and in this worthless day i spent alone
we all sat forward watching the spin
earth revolving round the radar screen
floating up and out of here again
sitting back and wonderin'
what the world learned back when
the day was young and things were fresh
when an idea came to us all quite clean
the day has been long
and night is banging down the hatch
and i just need to rest my back
and look around in the darkness
thinking of tomorrow and all its hope
when girls can still be a dream
they all dance and laugh with jubilent glee
and everyone is happy
waking up
trying your best
with what you have
is a complicated test
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6584
Posted: June 4, 2005 2:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 27, 2005 9:51 PM PDT
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