on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 3:31 AM
Not as good as you other longer one I'm afraid-6/10
on Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom
30 Sep 2002, 5:15 AM
Not sure this works, prbably because the spring is no longer in
on Tugboats by poetandknowit
4 Oct 2002, 12:50 AM
Great-evocative stuff
on Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom
30 Sep 2002, 5:17 AM
You get a much better class of conversation with a clock. What does promiscuous vacuity mean ?
on some deleted poem
30 Sep 2002, 12:21 AM
he he- nice one
on Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit
30 Sep 2002, 12:49 AM
I enjoyed it and thought it made sense until ..exploring into the late hours...8/10
on some deleted poem
30 Sep 2002, 12:55 AM
A stroke of genius or the emperor's new clothes ? I'll give you the benefit Hans- 7/10
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
21 Sep 2002, 5:06 AM
I think this is great, simple words like gin and bourbon and wine, now where have I heard that kind of thing before- Mr Babitt
on Leaf on the wind by troll454
7 Sep 2002, 7:43 AM
Almost haiku like at the end
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 2:27 AM
keybored ?- otherwise good-8/10
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 3:25 AM
This is a stronger piece than your others
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 2:52 AM
good
on Dancing against the rain by Corey McHattan
28 Aug 2002, 3:52 PM
great stuff-9/10
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2002, 3:29 AM
Not as good as tip-6/10
on Little lady by dolores
21 Sep 2002, 4:55 AM
This is incisive and so true-nicely put-9/10
on At the Olde Absinthe by Limness
21 Sep 2002, 7:01 AM
Absinthe makes the heart glow longer