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Free verse № 16005

Little lady

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

And if you ask her She has no name ; But her eyes say, Water is cold. She is three years old And willing to kiss ; But her lips say, Apples are sour.

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[7] jonnyduk 19-Sep-02/7:40 AM Reply
i'm sure your desperate for a review
[7] Christof 19-Sep-02/7:44 AM Reply
I like this - there's a big implied story behind the poem. The simplicity of what the girl 'says' is very childlike.
[n/a] heroditus 21-Sep-02/4:55 AM Reply
This is incisive and so true-nicely put-9/10