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Free verse № 17913

Shadows

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

Lonely nights slip silently past empty days Each feeding the void within my soul. Like a labyrinth within my mind I'm trapped in the futility of meaningless existence. While others choose to play the game I lay somnolent and wounded; a spectator of life. Ever deeper I dig trenches that provide me safety Walls, that one day will collapse around me To smother and suffocate that which it once protected.

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[9] Service 3-Oct-02/9:54 PM Reply
I can relate completely to your theme. Read my poem "human self pity" see if you like it. At least you are aware of the "unreal" things in your life.
[6] Nicholas Jones 6-Oct-02/4:37 AM Reply
Are you Darren Day?
[9] Dariana 6-Oct-02/5:02 AM Reply
Very deep and emotional.
[9] Ninoy_Instigator 6-Oct-02/8:50 PM Reply
Very deep and depressing. (Hey everybody, I want to know ur opinion of my poems! Please vote on mine too! thank you very much)