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Shadows (Free verse) by darren67
Lonely nights slip silently past empty days
Each feeding the void within my soul.
Like a labyrinth within my mind
I'm trapped in the futility of meaningless existence.
While others choose to play the game
I lay somnolent and wounded; a spectator of life.
Ever deeper I dig trenches that provide me safety
Walls, that one day will collapse around me
To smother and suffocate that which it once protected.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5833335
Weighted score: 5.4264507
Overall Rank: 3030
Posted: September 29, 2002 12:53 AM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2002 12:53 AM PDT
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