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Shadows (Free verse) by darren67

Lonely nights slip silently past empty days Each feeding the void within my soul. Like a labyrinth within my mind I'm trapped in the futility of meaningless existence. While others choose to play the game I lay somnolent and wounded; a spectator of life. Ever deeper I dig trenches that provide me safety Walls, that one day will collapse around me To smother and suffocate that which it once protected.

Ninoy_Instigator 6-Oct-02/8:50 PM
Very deep and depressing. (Hey everybody, I want to know ur opinion of my poems! Please vote on mine too! thank you very much)




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