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Little lady
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Free verse
) by
dolores
And if you ask her She has no name ; But her eyes say, Water is cold. She is three years old And willing to kiss ; But her lips say, Apples are sour.
Christof
19-Sep-02/7:44 AM
I like this - there's a big implied story behind the poem. The simplicity of what the girl 'says' is very childlike.
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