| Re: First by Dovina |
9-Aug-05/8:10 AM |
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So we're all Jerry's kids?
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| Re: REMEBER by prettyktm |
9-Aug-05/8:15 AM |
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| Re: Stream of Consciousness (#2) by MacFrantic |
10-Aug-05/8:48 AM |
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fallen within the drenched raincoat she finds a penguin cavity filled with desire to run and roam and make pool noodles out of foam
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| Re: Stream of Consciousness (#1) by Enkidu |
10-Aug-05/8:50 AM |
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Immediately remove your keyboard, shellac it, and donate it to the local museum. Next, buy a new one and finish this novel. Run straight home, Charlie: This. Is. Your. Golden. Ticket.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Aug-05/8:52 AM |
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What class was this written in? Before lunch or after lunch? Details please.
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| Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy |
31-Aug-05/9:59 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Sep-05/8:56 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Sep-05/8:57 AM |
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A comical glimpse into the life of a sad, sad individual
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| Re: Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic |
1-Sep-05/9:25 AM |
[Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic]
"This poem makes me want to impregnate your daughter, then impregnate the resulting child, and continue that trend for twelve hundred iterations resulting in a child so twisted and recursive in form as to be worthy of being smeared across your face. *4*"
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| Re: Stranger by MacFrantic |
2-Sep-05/7:35 AM |
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Third stanza is a bit shaky. Otherwise good. *8*
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| Re: The Absense of God by Bluemonkey |
2-Sep-05/7:40 AM |
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Not deep enough to be a repudiation of omnipresence; just deep enough to be flooded, gutted, and razed.
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| Re: Prick by Enkidu |
2-Sep-05/7:45 AM |
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I enjoyed it, until "Go live among your awesome aunts" took me out of the poem.
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| Re: Katrina by jessicazee |
2-Sep-05/10:29 AM |
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Could be really good, but the line "The quarter is French" is quite odd. Almost as odd as the French. Perhaps that's what you meant by it...
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| Re: Parrallelogram Perry Como by Crakyamuni |
6-Sep-05/10:05 AM |
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"?in the sea / in the sea" looks like a console query
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| Re: The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz |
2-Nov-05/4:38 PM |
(sorry if this sucks it was written while Return of the jedi was on
pause, the ewoks are kicking ass, gotta go)
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| Re: Dear George Bush by scitz |
2-Nov-05/4:44 PM |
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Everyboudy knouws that douring the American War Against the Hounourable King, us English were fighting for the rights of woumen, the blind, schooul children, and the ineluctable right to play Checkeurs the day befoure and afteur the Christiaun Sabbauth. You American fools deserve to be destrouyed!
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| Re: Tough Love by Crann Mascher |
21-Nov-05/8:33 PM |
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| Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0 |
17-Oct-07/12:45 AM |
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The word "separate" is the strongest word in this poem, thank you. Cheers and beers, and welcome to Area 6, secret hideout.
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| Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT |
17-Oct-07/12:47 AM |
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A slice of time. A 17 calorie slice of time, a thin, carbohydrate-free slice of time. A trans-fat free, utterly nutritionally void slice of time. ~10~
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Oct-07/12:48 AM |
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smells like a cigarette, reads like a dream ~9~
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