on spirit of a grama by livingcanvas
31 Aug 2002, 1:06 AM
"Now only a few crumbs..."comes beautfully like a downfall.7
on you're never alone by nentwined
1 Sep 2002, 8:12 AM
Never!
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2002, 2:11 AM
nice!The last stanza is the best.6
on A journey to the sun by kawakurdi
1 Sep 2002, 8:11 AM
Memorable lines"cry without voice
Die without body"liked it7
Die without body"liked it7
on Tunnel Vision by x311
31 Aug 2002, 8:17 AM
A powerful piece!7
on Black Heart by brazen
1 Sep 2002, 2:07 AM
the story is good,but it sounds as if you mean to reach the end of it as quickly as you can.(each sentence has the finality of a finale).I dare suggest you add some lines to your first stanza.something missing.wish you further success.(your angel is exceptional!)7
on Something in your eyes! by kawakurdi
31 Aug 2002, 2:10 AM
beautiful and earnest.7
on "The title is overused!" by vulcan
30 Aug 2002, 9:12 AM
Thanks zz!
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2002, 7:57 AM
a memorable night for a poet.original metaphor that of hormones.
on Black Heart by brazen
1 Sep 2002, 2:06 AM
the story is good,but it sounds as if you mean to reach the end of it as quickly as you can.(each sentence has the finality of a finale).I dare suggest you add some lines to your first stanza.something missing.wish you further success.(your angel is exceptional!)7
on Tunnel Vision by x311
31 Aug 2002, 8:22 AM
I read your "crying beside a lake"
your style has a moving force.my friends have gone too far.poem is in some parts confused,but never0!5.
your style has a moving force.my friends have gone too far.poem is in some parts confused,but never0!5.
on Passion's Flashes by RaychelW
31 Aug 2002, 1:08 AM
truly passionate.hope you success in later poems.7
on Terror Too Tranquil by RaychelW
31 Aug 2002, 1:10 AM
you are a poet indeed or become a real one soon.8
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2002, 2:28 AM
A vivid picture.liked the style.8
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2002, 4:43 AM
the tone is earnest,for that 5
on Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus
30 Aug 2002, 12:53 AM
A bit of fun,but is it Poetry?
on I'll Be In My Bed, My Grave by longships
1 Sep 2002, 8:02 AM
STRONG!7
on Tunnel Vision by x311
31 Aug 2002, 8:26 AM
Sorry x311!bother you too much.in your "Guide me"you are at your best.9
on some deleted poem
31 Aug 2002, 8:36 AM
Cool down!for your violence 7
on Mind Set Adrift by RaychelW
31 Aug 2002, 1:41 AM
Beauty of the poem lies in the first stanza.the second one is not that original.yet it was beautiful.6