| Re: a comment on Broken Clay by donmiguel1960 |
22-Apr-07/10:14 PM |
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Well thanks. Thats to most constructive responce i've had on any of my poems. you must really know your stuff. thank you very much.
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| Re: a comment on a days journey by donmiguel1960 |
22-Apr-07/5:25 AM |
Thanks for the thought, I also like this word.
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| Re: Lifes edge by donmiguel1960 |
17-Apr-07/3:27 AM |
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| Re: Sympathy by Miggy |
16-Apr-07/3:48 PM |
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| Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt |
16-Apr-07/3:47 PM |
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there is no point or thought in this
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| Re: a comment on a days journey by donmiguel1960 |
25-Mar-07/2:22 AM |
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good reply, the problem is neither do I, but thanks for the feed back.
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| Re: broken bottles by richa |
9-Feb-07/4:46 AM |
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| Re: a comment on a days journey by donmiguel1960 |
9-Feb-07/4:40 AM |
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that morning, i was deeply and emotionaly week. some days its hard to function, or even move. getting up to eat can be a task only to hope for. its an emotional struggle i live with. the word should be weak
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| Re: a comment on Tears by QuirkyWonder |
21-Jul-04/10:47 PM |
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| Re: Tears by QuirkyWonder |
21-Jul-04/10:45 PM |
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| Re: a comment on In prison I live, by donmiguel1960 |
21-Jul-04/10:39 PM |
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thanks for the specific coments. You are the only one who will stand up and say what you feel. Please do me a favor, and read my other poems
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| Re: a comment on Walking in a field by donmiguel1960 |
19-Jul-04/9:56 PM |
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the poem is about lifes trials. not a funeral, just the daily struggel.
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| Re: a comment on Walking in a field by donmiguel1960 |
19-Jul-04/9:55 PM |
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I think so, I mean, I like it. Sometimes the problem is that I feel to much. I write to try and cope.
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
16-Jul-04/9:05 AM |
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| Re: Ephemeral by shit |
16-Jul-04/9:00 AM |
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consider changing the last stansa
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| Re: Ago by Enkidu |
16-Jul-04/8:57 AM |
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| Re: a comment on You are my very Heart by donmiguel1960 |
16-Jul-04/8:54 AM |
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Thanks for your coment. You seem to really understand the art. is this your major?
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| Re: An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo |
1-Jul-04/6:16 AM |
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have no clue what its about, tell me
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| Re: An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo |
1-Jul-04/6:16 AM |
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I like the flow, but have
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| Re: a comment on When the night completes by donmiguel1960 |
1-Jul-04/6:14 AM |
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its about a lost love that i dream about from time to time
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