Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Sympathy (Lyric) by Miggy
I may feel alone sometimes But I never looked for any help You may hear my pleading cries Still nothing close to how I felt inside No hiding from what it’s worth To run away from it all again Pain won’t bring be back to my earth But as a friend you made it worse (Chorus) I don’t need Your sympathy All I wanted was Someone to love All your pity Is what I see And not what’s in Your fading heart My agony doesn’t mean That you should treat me differently Person to lean on is not the same As someone who wants to care Remorse won’t give me a second chance Nor find a way to get me cured Step by step from the past Your sorrow won’t bring me back (Chorus) False comfort Is what you are A lie in the mind Your support I will disregard Something more to find (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: Hailing Miriam
Down the ladder: Over and Gone

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 220
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 01
.. 00
.. 00
.. 36

Arithmetic Mean: 6.9117646
Weighted score: 6.9111238
Overall Rank: 220
Posted: September 10, 2003 2:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2003 2:43 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[7] donmiguel1960 @ 167.206.79.227 | 16-Apr-07/3:48 PM | Reply
I like it
340 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001