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Over and Gone (Lyric) by Miggy
I was preparing, it was a big night, Got afraid that this wouldn’t go right Then she appeared... I felt nervous, like any man would Just thinking if I could Have the chance To ask her to dance (Chorus) But that was then and this is now Don’t try to talk to me any way which how You should realize that the damage was done Baby, this is over and gone Yet, before I could ask There was a greater task Three other guys got her attention And she showed them her most loving affection So, she danced with all three Instead with the one who cared for her, which was me (Chorus) There she was, all nice and fine Giving all three of them a really great time And after I thought of every word I could say Told myself today can be that day So I thought of every word But every time I see her with them I lose my nerve (Chorus) I still remember All the times that we’re together And I still believe That there’s a you and me From the start Inside your heart Because in my soul Which is out of control I still love you And you know it’s true But anyway . . . (Chorus) Baby, that was over and gone

Up the ladder: Sympathy
Down the ladder: Leaving the Woods House

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.923077
Weighted score: 6.910206
Overall Rank: 221
Posted: May 27, 2003 12:49 PM PDT; Last modified: December 3, 2003 2:10 PM PST
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[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 27-May-03/1:07 PM | Reply
I've been there before and it sux AWARDE. -10-
Great writing this, If you ever record it as a song let me know.
[9] deleted user @ 162.83.177.68 | 27-May-03/2:22 PM | Reply
I like the last line in the second verse, very true. Anyway...not bad, there are some lines that could be redone but all in all, nice job. (9)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 27-May-03/5:08 PM | Reply
Did you get the inspiration for this from Chris de Burgh?
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.239.81 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 3-Dec-03/3:18 PM | Reply
do you get yours from ironside???!!
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 > richa | 4-Dec-03/3:33 PM | Reply
I get mine from dental hygeine!
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