I don't know...live and learn I guess...I was probably a bit harsh, I got heated in the moment you know? So it probably wasn't completely worthless..but who knows! :)

If the poem is that bad, then why not tell me why you are giving it a zero?

If you have something to say, then say it. If you actually read my poem you would see that I wasn't praising Reagan, I despised all of his social programs and anyone who understands Russian history knows that while he was President during an important time of U.S. and Soviet Union relations, the fall of that empire was more due to internal politics. So what are you telling me here?

I didn't say that the civil war was related to Ronald Reagan, what I said was, that seeing the sign reminded me of the CAUSES of the civil war, primarily the lack of common interests between the regions, the majority of churches split in the 1850's and the demise of the whig and the split that occured within the Democratic party at the convention of 1860 meant that regional parties and regional interests became more important in the lives of individuals, so that there was no common ground or connection between a farmer in the south and a worker in the North, the civil society and other factors that had kept the country together were no longer there. The country's response to the death of Reagan shows that today, our government and probably more importantly, our civil society is what unities us and maintains one country rather than allowing us to splinter into different groups. Thats what I was saying. While there are so many differences between us there are some similarities, I was just describing what happened to me yesterday as I was driving around town and thats what I was thinking of.

My life is fluff, huh?

It certaintly is, even when they're not your children! Its probably the most amazing experience that has altered my life, and hes not even mine!

Ya know, I'm not exactly sure if it worked out or not, I think I am still trying to figure out if it is good or bad, change is like that. But thanks!

Actually I think it was something mean haha, but its ok, thanks for the comments on the other poems.

not necessarily bad because its a "missing you" poem, no?

This does not say that my life has failed, and the baby is not mine-but thanks for reading closely and paying attention!

S4 L5 "He renews her and soothes my volatile heart" The mother and I are different people.

No, we aren't still together. I was trying to say that our bodies fit as we lay in the grass, but in addition, I felt that "we" fit as a couple, but maybe there is a better way to express that. Thanks for the suggestion!