Re: Wanting To Much by Katrina	17-May-04/9:41 PM
Do you mean for the title to be "Wanting TOO Much"? Some spelling errors, sorry to be nit picky. I think you can cut some stuff out, a bit repetitive, a standard poem on lost love, what makes this special or stand out? I think you could make this really good, you have plenty to work with. Nice start. Bob, can you read my poems when you are in the mood to give all 10's?!! :) Thanks!
Re: What's The Point? by Phalkon	17-May-04/9:32 PM
Well that attitue will get you no where! But I do sympathize. A bit whinny, but I am not one to judge! Not bad.
Re: Sunrise by Katrina	17-May-04/9:21 PM
Some parts of this were cliche, but its so true, isn't it funny how life works like that, and I know I could have written the same thing, so I can't fault you for that! Regardless, I love this, good job.
Re: sum of squares by nentwined	17-May-04/8:40 PM
I love this-you have read my mind. Good job.
Re: Pine by andrewjthomas	16-May-04/5:35 PM
I really liked this, it is a bit long, I'm not sure what I would take out. But I have to disagree with the others-I liked the last stanza and I still cared at the end, but I may have drifted a bit in the middle, overall very well done.
Re: Desire by mk32	11-May-04/8:17 PM
Some lines were a little awkward but I'm not as into style and grammar as most people on this site are-for me poetry is about expressing what you need to express-I felt and connect with what you were expressing-for that-well done, I enjoyed this.
Re: Its raining by caitydee	10-May-04/9:30 PM
sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!
Re: untitled lyric by jsd	10-May-04/5:32 PM
theres some really good stuff here, i think you were able to express your thoughts well, it was a nice read, well done