Re: Dreams by lil_evil_boi	ALChemy 65.188.92.49	8-Jun-05/7:04 AM
How 'bout "This is an egg. This is an egg on crack. Any questions."
Re: on my hog by nentwined	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	8-Jun-05/6:51 AM
To be overly technical: Three chambered kabooms? Harleys have two cylinders unless the sound is the 3 syllabled Po-ta-to sound . Yes, the approach is confusing. Maybe you don't need one. I'm just haranguessing you. I should talk, I ride a 95 Nighthawk which makes no such audible safety noises.
Re: a comment on The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote	ALChemy 65.188.92.49	8-Jun-05/6:47 AM
Assuming this is D_Q. I was actually talking about all the ranting in your comment and reply boxes. Which by the way I found very entertaining. "My lil slothful Miggletoe?" made me laugh my ass off.
Re: From by sacred_poet_me	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:24 AM
Make your big sister stop stroking your ego with Tens, she's not helping you. What I quite like in this Town Hall Registration Data list is the melancholic >>I am from<< repetition.
Re: Life by sacred_poet_me	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:16 AM
All those long lines, there's no poetry in them. They also tell me what I've been knowing for thousands of years.
Re: Oh by sacred_poet_me	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:12 AM
Hip. Might work behind the microphone, but for a simple reading it's too long.
Re: Treasure What? by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:09 AM
It works better if you do away with the puncts
Re: Friends? by poodietat	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	8-Jun-05/6:05 AM
Given the restriction of the form you've done well. A haiku however is a view on Nature. Hm, well, fucking is quite Nature. The first line is a bit odd. In meaning, that is.
Re: a comment on -750,000 in Rwanda by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.92.49	8-Jun-05/5:26 AM
Thank you Dovina. I'll drop that last verse. I look forward to reading some of your work soon.
Re: a comment on Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams	hendrimike 70.106.122.122	7-Jun-05/9:57 PM
yup
Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/9:20 PM
Bizarre...
Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/9:19 PM
You thought it was an actual song too? LOL. Me 2. But Hendrimike actaully wrote it. Isnt that amazing?
Re: An Unusual Elegy by psychedelic	hendrimike 70.106.122.122	7-Jun-05/9:16 PM
loved it...<9>
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	hendrimike 70.106.122.122	7-Jun-05/9:11 PM
what's up with the voting/rank system on this site...my votes disappeared
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/8:53 PM
WOW. THis song is lovely. <8>
Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	hendrimike 70.106.122.122	7-Jun-05/8:29 PM
i am in my mid-twenties...i wrote it as a song...got to learn that geetar though
Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/8:23 PM
Really? Amazing. You could be a songwriter when you grow up. Unless you already are. It's probably so good that it sounds like a song. I dont think you've posted it under the wrong category. It's good. I wonder if others think it's a song too.
Re: a comment on on my hog by nentwined	nentwined 68.232.253.122	7-Jun-05/8:19 PM
I actually changed it from "two rocks sit on the pavement" Hmm. "fly from my approach" -> "they fly as I near"? Hmm. See, I thought they were rocks, and it turned out they were birds. I suppose I should sit on this one a bit more.
Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	hendrimike 70.106.122.122	7-Jun-05/8:12 PM
i guess i picked the wrong category...i wrote it.
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	7-Jun-05/8:08 PM
Hi. Just curious, where did you get the lyrics from? What song? I find the lyrics touching. Somehow. <7>