ALChemy
on Dreams by lil_evil_boi
8 Jun 2005, 7:04 AM
How 'bout "This is an egg. This is an egg on crack. Any questions."
To be overly technical:
Three chambered kabooms? Harleys have two cylinders unless the sound is the 3 syllabled Po-ta-to sound . Yes, the approach is confusing. Maybe you don't need one. I'm just haranguessing you. I should talk, I ride a 95 Nighthawk which makes no such audible safety noises.
ALChemy
replying on The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote
8 Jun 2005, 6:47 AM
Assuming this is D_Q. I was actually talking about all the ranting in your comment and reply boxes. Which by the way I found very entertaining. "My lil slothful Miggletoe?" made me laugh my ass off.
Make your big sister stop stroking your ego with Tens, she's not helping you.
What I quite like in this Town Hall Registration Data list is the melancholic >>I am from<< repetition.
All those long lines, there's no poetry in them. They also tell me what I've been knowing for thousands of years.
Hip.
Might work behind the microphone, but for a simple reading it's too long.
It works better if you do away with the puncts
Thank you Dovina. I'll drop that last verse. I look forward to reading some of your work soon.
yup
Bizarre...
You thought it was an actual song too? LOL. Me 2. But Hendrimike actaully wrote it. Isnt that amazing?
loved it...<9>
what's up with the voting/rank system on this site...my votes disappeared
WOW. THis song is lovely. <8>
i am in my mid-twenties...i wrote it as a song...got to learn that geetar though
Really? Amazing. You could be a songwriter when you grow up. Unless you already are. It's probably so good that it sounds like a song. I dont think you've posted it under the wrong category. It's good. I wonder if others think it's a song too.
i guess i picked the wrong category...i wrote it.
Hi. Just curious, where did you get the lyrics from? What song? I find the lyrics touching. Somehow. <7>