Not incorrect phrasing; incorrect quoting. Like that even more.

Awwww. Thanks... From what I can tell, you're opinion is held very highly here, so I consider your... word, a great complement.

'for Allah's good' may be an incorrect phrasing, but that's exactly why I like it. Keep it in please.

Please see zodiac’s explanation below on how different Islamic culture is from Mohammed’s teaching. We are dealing with a male-centered society where women are dirt! I have looked at your suggested line edits and, while I find no overt grammatical errors or ugly structure, your opinion on this is as good as mine. Your changes would simplify the reading, making it more like an essay, less like a poem. Your point about trying to make Allah better by casting the woman out would be a good point if that were what I meant. (It’s the same point zodiac makes below.) The fact that both of you took it that way means that I might want to rephrase. Surely, the husband did not think Allah needs improvement. He probably thought that anything done to respect or adore Allah would be a good thing – “for Allah’s good.” I think I’ll change the last line to “to cast her out in Allah’s name.” A interesting thing about both Islam and Christianity is that the founder’s teachings have little impact the practices of those religions. Some of the churches are beginning to see that Jesus’ teachings actually have value as they are written, and some of the Islamic teachers are beginning to do the same with Mohammed’s words.

bitches is the right word. More than one bitch in this brew. maybe bitches'?

Again, thanks for the comment. I am changing the “robbers” line; see above comments.

Although the story was told as true, I suspect that the teller may have exaggerated the part about making her look like she’s been robbed. I think, from what you say and what I have read about Islamic societies, (and I’m talking about strict Islam like it was in Afghanistan before the war), that the robbed-woman image would not pass. I’ll change the poem to have her wounded as if from an accident of some kind. I don’t know why you laugh at “disgrace” in Stanza 2. Humiliation and a feeling of being disgraced are usual parts of rape-trauma. I was pointing out that for this woman those feelings are a far lesser concern that her husband’s discovery that she’d been raped. See my answer above for "cast her out for Allah's good"

sorry.. just meant that I like those lines.

http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/apostro.asp Thank you good sir. It does require an additional s.

Yep, that's what it says.

Thanks for the comments and for taking a suggestion on commenting more.