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Dan garcia-Black on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 16 Jun 2005, 8:30 AM

We have no Autumn where I live. Thanks for the images.

Dan garcia-Black on Auto-bio Poem by sacred_poet_me 16 Jun 2005, 8:28 AM

How are things at Michael Jackson's place these days?

Dan garcia-Black on Don't be gay by wCUNTw 16 Jun 2005, 8:14 AM

If you feel up Perry Como Then you are a Necro-homo.

some deleted user on Sisyphus' wife by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 16 Jun 2005, 4:13 AM

Shouldn't that be Sisyphus's Wife? If not, my 'Doris's off-day' needs a title revision... This poem? Totally incomprehensive to me.

Blue Magpie on Between the Edges by woodstock20000 15 Jun 2005, 11:40 PM

Quite nice imagery/thoughts but as a poem it lacks, at least for me, that special something that elevates the language beyong prose.

sacred_poet_me on Yellow Am I by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 9:42 PM

You make yellow sound so holy and powerful. Why did you choose yellow? Just out of curiosity. BTW...-8-

sacred_poet_me on Beach Volleyball by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 9:40 PM

I dont know what to give you here. I think this poem is too simple and I think it needs more creativity. So I'll give you a 5. Not bad not good.

sacred_poet_me on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 9:38 PM

I love the repetition of the question and the yes. Also you've described each of autumn's personality really well. I think you deserve a -9-

sacred_poet_me replying on Auto-bio Poem by sacred_poet_me 15 Jun 2005, 9:36 PM

Thx.

lil_evil_boi replying on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 9:11 PM

K. Thanks again~

Gaiadok on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 8:52 PM

Perhaps there are a few that can be simplified into each other, but then again, maybe not. Maybe I just don't like the style as much as I do others, I'm not quite sure. Try reading it with thoughts of how to bring personalities together maybe? Or compare the personalities, instead of questioning each one individually. Your call

lil_evil_boi replying on Books by sacred_poet_me 15 Jun 2005, 7:49 PM

I agree.

lil_evil_boi replying on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 7:48 PM

Oh. Sorry..I didnt quite catch that. My apologies. As for the question/yes thing, what do you think about it? Do you think it would be better if I simplified it? But do you think the reader will understand each verse and knowing that they each represent autumn's unique characteristics and personalities?

lil_evil_boi on Auto-bio Poem by sacred_poet_me 15 Jun 2005, 7:48 PM

Descriptive and imaginative. Great. -8-

Gaiadok replying on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 7:30 PM

Ah, you misunderstood me. Not the length of the poem itself, I liked that, I mean the question/yes thing. It's good, but perhaps too much of it. Oh well, as the writer, take it anyway you want with it, just a suggestion.

lil_evil_boi replying on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 7:22 PM

Thanks.

lil_evil_boi replying on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 7:22 PM

Umm...i prefer it to be this long. But thanks for the suggestion. And glad you enjoyed it.

Gaiadok on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 7:18 PM

Hmmm... I rather liked that actually. I believe the questions and yes answer got a bit repetitive, but I can see that was kind of the point as well. Perhaps there is a way to cut down on it? But, anyway, good job.

some deleted user on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi 15 Jun 2005, 7:14 PM

At the end I'm dying for a No. The poem in itself is not a bad idea and the phrasing is decorative.

some deleted user on Impeccable mess by sk8rs_rule_all 15 Jun 2005, 7:08 PM

A textform as massive as a granite block. So popular, these days. So easy to write, too. >>I was once torn and you helped me<< >>I reach for the rope looking for a way out and you pulled me through<< No further comment.