Re: a comment on When the muse calls. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	16-Jun-05/11:17 PM
I decided on inhibition. it just seemed to flow better to my ear. I appreciate the spell check. thanks again.
Re: a comment on When the muse calls. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	16-Jun-05/11:08 PM
Thank you bankrupt. I will fix it and use your suggestion.
Re: a comment on Love by untamed_fierce	sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244	16-Jun-05/9:04 PM
Agree.
Re: a comment on Naughty Poems (R) by untamed_fierce	sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244	16-Jun-05/9:03 PM
Yes indeed. Very interesting...
Re: Special Place by untamed_fierce	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	16-Jun-05/8:44 PM
Let me guess...a library?
Re: Fourteen Years by impert&ent	daniella 200.89.142.43	16-Jun-05/8:29 PM
as in bowls me over bowls
Re: the space between by impert&ent	daniella 200.89.142.43	16-Jun-05/8:27 PM
there should be an inhalation at the end of these lines.
Re: Wholes: the year in reflection by impert&ent	daniella 200.89.142.43	16-Jun-05/8:25 PM
and i miss reading your heart
Re: These are not just words by impert&ent	daniella 200.89.142.43	16-Jun-05/8:23 PM
Words are not meant to persuade But to convey... perfect synthesis.
Re: fire has its own logic by impert&ent	daniella 200.89.142.43	16-Jun-05/8:20 PM
i like reading your mind
Re: Naughty Poems (R) by untamed_fierce	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	16-Jun-05/8:01 PM
Facinating poems...
Re: Love by untamed_fierce	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	16-Jun-05/8:00 PM
True. But you can stop by hating someone.
Re: a comment on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	16-Jun-05/7:50 PM
Merci.
Re: Students by Blue Magpie	Dan garcia-Black 69.237.76.28	16-Jun-05/7:37 PM
I hear children's voices reading lines 12 through 14. I would hope that there are teachers in this country who might listen to their students as well as you seem to listen to yours. I admit that lines 7 through 11 are a bit off putting in that the images have already been overused in the daily media. But all in all, it seems to be an honest effort.
Re: Deconstruction Of The Heart by impert&ent	daniella 200.89.142.43	16-Jun-05/7:05 PM
you are a deconstructionist, in a twist of taking down all that has fallen apart.
Re: Don't be gay by wCUNTw	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	16-Jun-05/5:59 PM
I have this giant black friend with a shlong like a python. He likes Perry Como music and (up)tight cunts, and wants to get in contact with you.
Re: a comment on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	Dan garcia-Black 69.237.76.28	16-Jun-05/5:21 PM
LA, Southern Cal. We have Summer that goes through January when it begins to rain and then Winter that pretends to find Spring in Apri but it's really only Summer with foggy mornings and hot afternoons.
Re: a comment on The Magic Of Autumn by lil_evil_boi	lil_evil_boi 70.68.76.244	16-Jun-05/5:11 PM
Really? Cool. Where do you live?
Re: I AM WHO I AM by blackthoughtz1	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	16-Jun-05/4:49 PM
By the way, you were outranked ages ago, by Popeye: I yam what I yam.
Re: I AM WHO I AM by blackthoughtz1	some deleted user 81.69.23.196	16-Jun-05/4:48 PM
>>I am, unique.<< Sigh. That's as far as I came. I really wonder why you bother with puncts and comma's and spaces.